Huh

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Huh There was a sound outside. It was louder than it should have been, and, yet not loud enough. A few people heard it, and they told others. The news of the noise spread. They tried to get closer, to come from all over, to hear, what no one heard… What no one said. The sound was outside. (no one is listening still… )

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 8/10/2019 1:04:00 PM

Hello Ann Foster, it is strange that no one is listening. that person could be upset. Also it is hard to hear the word Cancer. Have a nice day my friend.

Ann Foster
Date: 8/10/2019 5:16:00 PM

Yes... Death has many faces, and fear is his best friend. They all run and hide... when the light is shown!!! Hugs. Ann

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/7/2019 1:08:00 AM

Mysterious write Ann - thought provoking - hugs, Jennifer.

Ann Foster
Date: 8/10/2019 5:15:00 PM

You are so sweet. Thank you. (we all wonder...what is that bump...in the night?) sometimes... we don't really want to know. Hugs. Ann

James Horn

Date: 8/6/2019 9:17:00 AM

You even have a lager names after you. Nice and should suffice even when you do roll dice.

Ann Foster
Date: 8/6/2019 10:22:00 AM

You are so nice, at any price my friend. :) Hope you day is full of sun and fun. :)) Hugs. Ann

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 8/6/2019 8:07:00 AM

Eerie piece! xomo

Ann Foster
Date: 8/6/2019 10:21:00 AM

Oh, hugs. I am glad you enjoyed it. Sometimes there is just a noise... Gaint trolls walk by the house, and later, there are only prints in the sand, that disappear in the breeze... Ann