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Hug Me

without a word I inquired of you to allow me a quick hug to see me though So nicely my pixel head nestled upon your pixel chest of which I stood back from after a pause or two least not wanting any tongues to wag or disturb the honor of his lovers knot My moment of sadness was stifled some it lifted for that 6-second slot Oh joyful mood that eludes now will come again solemness was due A smile returns from some unknown path the corners of lip curl in reply The internal struggle against sorrow and pain was conquered by that friendly pose

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Skat A

Date: 8/4/2015 9:09:00 PM

MAGNEETA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/13/2015 1:15:00 AM

Magneeta, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Magneeta Sojourner
Date: 7/26/2015 5:30:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to welcome me and reading my work. I feel so very "at" home here. I look forward to getting to know my fellow poets. So good of you to make me feel apart of the big community Linda !

Skat A

Date: 7/13/2015 12:27:00 AM

Magneeta, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Magneeta Sojourner
Date: 7/26/2015 5:36:00 PM

Well, thank you very much, Skat ! I am so intrigued by the openness and caring spirit I've encountered in poetrysoup. I will drop you a line certainly and say a little about myself. I can start here by stating I am new to writing poetry. I usually only have written stories so this is a new territory for me. I am from the Mid-West and I welcome critique with suggestions along with noted areas of weak verse or whatever is lacking.