Hues To Blues

Its perfect here.
     I love it.
     Here...Peace and serenity fill and warm my heart.
     Out here...Its like Im someone else.
     Its so calm.
     Its a place where I can finally find myself.
         That was before.
         This is after.
     Here it was green and every hue you could imagine.
     Now...Its black and ash.
     You knew I loved it so you took it.
     You took it from me.
     I've lost it.
     I've lost myself.
     You took this cluster of nature from me.
     And with it you took a peice of me.
     With or without you,
     I'm stronger.
     Although its nothing,
     but black ash and smoke,
     I still love it here.
     I will come here
     and loose myself as I did before,
     Even though it is after.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Novotny Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 6:08 PM
You've chosen to call this Light Poetry, but I find it deeply moving. Congratulations. - Chuck
Kay Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 3:58 PM
Thanks So much! I am looking forward to reading your petry as well. :D
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March 13, 2012 at 6:28 AM
<======thinks this lovely... Patrick
Kay Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 3:59 PM
Thanks so much i appreciate that you have read my poetry and am looking forward toreading yours. ;P
Brown Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 7:17 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Cheyenne. Love, Carol
Kay Avatar
April 3, 2012 at 3:59 PM
Thanks so much am looking forward to beading more of your poerty Carol...Thanks again ;D
Kemp Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 2:40 PM
this is an amazing poem i thought i would come and check out the poems you written i knew you were good but i didn't know you were this good
Bishop Avatar
June 17, 2011 at 2:37 AM
wow this is amazing just truly amazing all your poems are chyernne
Kay Avatar
February 18, 2012 at 9:50 PM
Thank you! IT means alot having other people read my poetry and like them. Thanks alot!
Kay Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 5:49 AM
Thank you so much!Im amazed that people such as yourself is commenting on my poems...I never expected it at all...I am only a young...very young poet. Not a professional yet but some day I hope to be. All these sincere comments make me feel better about myself.Thank you so much!
Mehta Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 1:26 PM
Very creative, deeply meaningful write, Cheyenne
Kay Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 5:51 AM
Thank you! SOmeday I hope to have a book of my own and I think within a few years I will have a poetry books and you and all of the others who have commented on my work will be in the thanks! Because you guys are so nice and I negver expected this website to be so thoughtful and sincere!Thank you so very much!
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