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Hue's Orientation...

Dark matter colored by the ray's of light spectrum, image reflected....

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 11/6/2010 1:20:00 PM

Very nice Senryu which I also see as Haiku. I think you are fascinated by creation. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and thanks again for your kind comments on my latest poem. Caroline.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/5/2010 1:51:00 PM

Good thought expressed with good images, jay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/5/2010 11:59:00 AM

Interesting and educational write.. I am glad that I chose this one to read this afternoon..Thanks for laughing with me about my puter mouse...Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/5/2010 11:48:00 AM

have just read this and am intruiged, i have written on light myself, not extensivley on p s, however i take note that some poets seem to be drawn this way, i replied to another a couple of days ago, can't recall his name right now, any way have enjoyed this.