Hues of Rain

Rain sketches lulled dusk
in eaves of mint blue,
bathing tender flesh
from autumn’s debut--
Parasols sway and dance
through spilled avenue.
Green-gold drops ripple,
soaked in dazzling hues
inviting  bare lips
to taste honeydew;
wet kisses’ painting
love on  avenue.



Theme #7 -COLORS- (old/new) 
Contest sponsored by Skat
17 January 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 12:47 AM
Amelia, Congratulations in the SKAT contest. LINDA
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:40 PM
Congrats on ur great win with this colourful write amelie!
Onclaud Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 1:05 PM
this so lively, charming!..big congrats, amelie..huggs
Gulley Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 10:50 AM
Amelie, Congratulations on your win in Skat's contest of color. Loved this poem.....Sharon : )
A  Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:47 AM
Amelie,, Congratulations on your awesome colored win. Drop by my blog " Character Sketch" if ya like. LOVE ** SKAT **
Onclaud Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 1:09 PM
ohh, i like the way this just flows... very rhythmic and well pinted, amelie.. thanks for your comments.. huggs
Raha Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 9:52 AM
majestic,simply majestic amelie.
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