Hued Dawn Rises

HUED DAWN RISES
When the hued dawn rises from the horizon in flair I find my mind morphing into a beautiful butterfly. On its wings the tapestry of dream begins to fly with all the colors of the heart to the future. The fractured future tumbles in the sunset storm, the battered butterfly loses wings in its wake. Restive mind wonders how long it’d take for the dreams to break or to deform. Moon in opaque night goes behind clumpy cloud, I then light a lone candle in my marooned mind where in the ruins my lost dreams I try to find before passive past covers them in shroud. When the razing squall splinters my hopes in rout flicker in flame of candle the wind would make. The pained mind wonders how long it’d take for the lonely waning candle to burn out.
September 9, 2018 Contest : Enclosed Rhyme - September 2018 Sponsored By : Dear Heart

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Date: 8/4/2019 5:53:00 PM
A lovely write Subimal.
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Date: 10/12/2018 1:15:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. A well deserved top placement.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/15/2018 12:45:00 AM
Thank you, Jesse.
Date: 10/10/2018 7:55:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Subimal. Congrats on your top win.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/11/2018 12:09:00 AM
Thank you, Line.
Date: 10/9/2018 8:53:00 PM
What a beautiful composition the candle metaphor is mind blowing. .perfect choice of words
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/10/2018 5:45:00 AM
Thank you so much for your comments.
Date: 10/9/2018 2:38:00 PM
Great metaphor of butterflies and sunset storms, thanks for entering my contest!
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/10/2018 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, Michelle for the placement.
Date: 10/3/2018 6:53:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Subimal. Well done.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/5/2018 12:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 10/5/2018 12:24:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line.
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