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Hudson

moon shines over and blows on the hudson a shimmering ribbon blue white on the chop a few boats near the shore magnificent houses in this old town from time before history as I sit knees to chin on the church steps mild early fall moments music in the air all around gnarled century trees sentinals of farmers, authors and headless men lovers by the shore have stood beneath them bathed in the river musk that carries me now

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Date: 10/27/2009 1:06:00 PM
when I travel to the Hudson River Valley, the river has a musk so unique unlike anything else, in the air, the trees, the dirt....
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Date: 10/27/2009 10:40:00 AM
Ok between you and Carol..I get it..write more to end the verse more satisfactorily (Son Shine) I did. Hope it feels better to you. "bathed in the river's musk" excellent line here! Light & Love
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