Augustus Black Poet Senryu

Huckleberry's Dad

pap comes on whisky; 
whenever he falls down, says
wildly, "Who pushed me?"
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This is taken from my own new fiction book "The New Adventures of Tom Sawyer." Read this book it's available on Amazon.

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Susan Gentry August 6, 2018 at 4:51 PM Congratulations on your win! Like this! Will check out your book now. Augustus Black August 7, 2018 at 1:06 AM Thank you very much. I hope you will like my book.

Moon Flower August 5, 2018 at 8:42 PM Something that depicts wittiness with such brevity. Congratulations!

Eve Roper August 5, 2018 at 2:30 PM Hahaha, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Mark Toney August 4, 2018 at 2:58 PM Congratulations on your win, Augustus. Very sobering message, in more ways than one :) I love Tom and Huck, so I'll need to check out your book :) Augustus Black August 4, 2018 at 9:19 PM Thanks a lot Mark. I hope you will like my book.

Line Gauthier August 3, 2018 at 11:14 PM Congrats on your win, Augustus. Augustus Black August 4, 2018 at 9:19 PM Thanks

Andrea Dietrich August 3, 2018 at 3:14 PM BAck with GRATS

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart August 3, 2018 at 1:29 PM Heh, good one, painfully so ;) Congrats on your win! xomo Augustus Black August 4, 2018 at 9:20 PM Thanks

Andrea Dietrich July 31, 2018 at 6:35 PM Ha! I enjoyed this, Augustus.

John Lawless July 30, 2018 at 9:31 AM 'When whiskey's on - wits gone" Augustus Black July 30, 2018 at 10:16 AM Very well said. Thanks for the comment.

Chuck Melugin July 30, 2018 at 6:07 AM A book full in a few words! Whiskey becomes a bully!

Caren Krutsinger July 29, 2018 at 10:34 PM Augustus, this was a fast, fun, read. There is so much truth in it, it is a special poem.