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For Edward Ibeh's This Or That, Vol 34 Poetry Contest/ June 17, 2025

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Howling Wilderness

High winds have come to a land remote and wild.
Oak leaves tremble in the black of night
While critters to the underbrush for the present are exiled.
Like a giant thrashing fiend, wind roars with all its might,
Increasing in intensity as if something got it very riled.
Not many birds will still remain where there is great height.
Gone into thick shrubbery, they’ll hide away tonight.

Wolves huddle together, for they are clever.
Into their dens they go or seek shelter in other spots they find,
Lest things worsen, however, 
Dogs of the wild won’t leave any of their pack behind.
Emitting long howls, they communicate.
Rolling thunder proves the whipping wind is more than scowling.
Not too soon will the wailing tempest’s tantrum abate.
Every wolf joins the wind in prolonged persistent howling.
Since the fierce fiend has now begun screeching like a banshee,
Scintillating stars tonight the wilderness won’t likely see.
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Guptar Avatar
June 30, 2025 at 9:08 AM
Congratulations dear poetess on your win in Ibeh`s contest with a lovely rhyming acrostic on wilderness. It is not always easy to have real rhymes in acrostic poems, particularly if these are set in metres.
Hind Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 12:22 PM
I like the imagery so much, it haunts, as well as howls- and I liked how you rhymed- a great art <3
Mckeithan Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 5:46 PM
Great acrostic Andrea. The imagery is excellent and a nice one for the contest
Narain Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 9:26 AM
Nice poem depicting howling wilderness. Great acrostic.
Onclaud Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 8:33 AM
now this is a gem, andie...i likey lots!
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 3:43 PM
Much as gracias, muchacha
May Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 7:49 AM
Very nicely done Andrea, I enjoyed the read
Kerr Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Andrea, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest with this magnificent piece which meets all the parameters of the challenge so succinctly. An amazing tale sustained by superb imagery, excellent vocabulary and plot Howard
Meadows Avatar
June 18, 2025 at 12:00 AM
Great poem!! Well written. Hope you have a lovely day!!
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