How You Opened My Cover

You have no idea
How you opened my cover
You read me, understand me
You completely feel me
No one can have enough love
In all it's layers and forms
You inspire me everyday
Knowing how you know me
That all of me is yours to keep
I can be everything I want to be
Connected with you in my life

It's the deepness of your mind
How passionate you are inside
The generosity towards others
Your voice - a deep friend
Just one touch - my soul sings
My heart is a place to live
I love that you have the key
Lock your heart to mine within
It's yours - you have moved in
Eternally is just the beginning
Trust, Faith, Tears and Love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/18/2015 1:43:00 PM
wonderful poem SHAZ
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Date: 11/1/2014 8:58:00 AM
Second line consider changing opened to open. You have switched tenses and it confuses the narrative of an otherwise spectacular write. I enjoyed this romantic declaration.
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Date: 7/23/2014 3:22:00 AM
I wanted someone to speak to me, to reach me with an offering that lets me glimpe into that sacred site that dwells within. Your poem has done just that. How welcome your poetry is here! Let me welcome you Shaz! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 7/22/2014 2:01:00 PM
A very heartfelt write. :o) Nice to see your still writing.
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Date: 7/13/2014 1:24:00 PM
who'd you piss off on this site. ? Nobody commenting on good poetry anymore!!! Geez Lou-EAZE! Keep pumpin' out the hot joints. peAce
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