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How You Opened My Cover

You have no idea How you opened my cover You read me, understand me You completely feel me No one can have enough love In all it's layers and forms You inspire me everyday Knowing how you know me That all of me is yours to keep I can be everything I want to be Connected with you in my life It's the deepness of your mind How passionate you are inside The generosity towards others Your voice - a deep friend Just one touch - my soul sings My heart is a place to live I love that you have the key Lock your heart to mine within It's yours - you have moved in Eternally is just the beginning Trust, Faith, Tears and Love

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Date: 6/18/2015 1:43:00 PM
wonderful poem SHAZ
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Date: 11/1/2014 8:58:00 AM
Second line consider changing opened to open. You have switched tenses and it confuses the narrative of an otherwise spectacular write. I enjoyed this romantic declaration.
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Date: 7/23/2014 3:22:00 AM
I wanted someone to speak to me, to reach me with an offering that lets me glimpe into that sacred site that dwells within. Your poem has done just that. How welcome your poetry is here! Let me welcome you Shaz! Aloha, Connie
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Date: 7/22/2014 2:01:00 PM
A very heartfelt write. :o) Nice to see your still writing.
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Date: 7/13/2014 1:24:00 PM
who'd you piss off on this site. ? Nobody commenting on good poetry anymore!!! Geez Lou-EAZE! Keep pumpin' out the hot joints. peAce
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