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How You Make Me Feel

It's your presence that brightens Your smile so contagious Infecting me - absorbing you I had been deficient but now I have you You are the inspiration You are the drive You are the key to the potential in me Upside down and inside out My world has a different view Because of you I could see the possibilities Always seemed out of reach Because of you - I have the key To open the door and be set free Its the confidence you give me To achieve almost anything You see beyond the surface You hear me even when I'm quiet Intuitive to my thoughts Sensing when the cogs turn It's how you want to know every part of me You are the sunshine even in the cold You are the strength when I feel weak You are the confidence when I feel fear You are the clarity when I'm at a crossroad You are the vision when all I see is fog You are the man in my dreams A man that I always wished to exist YOU are so much more than my words can ever say.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/19/2013 11:08:00 AM
Shaz Cheesman, the Queen of Free Verse!! Beautiful, flowing words with an elegant and tranquil flair!...I'm GREEN with envy!! LOL!!...Milt
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Date: 7/19/2013 4:06:00 AM
- Shaz, sooo romantic written - Use the key .... accept the love! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/15/2013 6:50:00 PM
This is a very tender and special poem. It brings me a :o) Quite the man you have there...
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:46:00 PM
You were on such a roll yesterday I thought I would come back to a bunch npmore. Either way hi.
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Date: 7/13/2013 9:03:00 AM
Reminds me of "More than Words" from Extreme. Gorgeous song, gorgeous & heart-filling poem. Let the honesty & depth shine!
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Date: 7/13/2013 6:21:00 AM
Sounds like quite the guy. I am happy for you Shaz.
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Date: 7/13/2013 12:56:00 AM
Awesome read.
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