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How Would You Like A Woman Who Is Not Beautiful

How would you like a woman who is not beautiful
Or how would she make an achievement in any day
How would you like a woman who is not talented
Or she can achieve something through her tough mind
You think she is beautiful, but not beautiful outside
A little bit not like a woman, she knows self-defense
Actually there are no rules to define what beauty is
What is a woman like or a man like as it perceive
What I like a woman is simple, no inhibition, no frills
She is the one that I admire, I just feel it in my heart
Sometimes she may be a bit arbitrary, self-willed 
Unreasonable or kind of independent and different
But if everyone in the world can understand her
Though how mediocre could she be at her own will.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/15/2025 11:17:00 AM

Hello Hugo, I read this poem several times. I did not understand this poem. I believe a woman is beautiful if not on the outside, she has inner beauty that shines on the outside. There is more to a woman than beauty on the outside. Much love here . /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/16/2025 10:12:00 AM

Hello Hugo, Women beautiful on the inside. The good looking women and the very handsome man know they look good and when they date a woman they break their heart. I prefer the average guy. To me he is handsome. Much love here. /DARLENE/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 4/16/2025 2:04:00 AM

It may seems perplexing to think a woman who is not beautiful, Darlene. It's one different observation in every eyes. Say for instance, my wife is not beautiful base on standard eyes. My colleagues at my age jokingly told me that my wife is way far not beautiful than my former girlfriends. I really accept their comments. I don't get hurts. But, it's quite fascinate me that I'm seeing differently that my friends not able to see what I see on her. Perhaps you understand what I mean in this poem as you go one more time reading it. Any, I appreciate you feeling animosity about reading this. I love you more for that./Hugo.