How We Was

I wish we were still close, 
Our relationship's destroyed,
My heart aches for you in sorrow,
I remember when we both smiled,
When we spoke the same words,
When i had problems of my own,
Knowing i had no one to run to,
Other than talk to my mind,
Fear was written all over me ,
Laying at night,
Wishing i still had you,
Crying never made it better,
Being told somethink looked to be playing my mind,
Feeling crushed and thrown away on a desert island alone,
Felt gulity,demolished,
There i was no where to be noticed or found in that dark dull enviroment lost,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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August 3, 2010 at 5:21 PM
Wow excellent poem. Welcome to the soup
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August 1, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight..looking forward to many more.. with luv..
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