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How We Met

Sitting on the railings nonchalantly My eyes caught a glimpse of you Under the waning moon When the cock was yet to crow I put on my overall coat Grabbed my helmet and axe And advanced into the mine to mine For I was keen on making you mine She asked "But why a mine?" A smile spread across my face And she looked intently into my eyes As I said "Because your heart's gold".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/23/2018 4:47:00 AM
Very clever and those words made it special.Another nice write Joshua,thank you
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Date: 7/21/2018 1:42:00 PM
I wrote something similar to this called "Why" but no where as good as yours. It's just good to know someone else views the world as I do.
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Date: 7/21/2018 1:33:00 PM
Wow, to me this poem is actually beautiful and to know a guy thinks of a girl like that. wow just wow amazing job.
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Joshua Popoola
Date: 7/21/2018 3:28:00 PM
Thanks a whole lot

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