How To Love Pt2 Take More Notes

I got this love that cant be verbally exagerated
Emotionally dead she my feelings rescuscitated
And now I am led to make sure its reciprocated
So when in the bed we make love till incompasitated

Its hard to explain this since my minds become selfish
Only thoughts of her touch it manifests and relish
And now my hearts jealous cause my brain has it helpless
It cant be controlled so I hold myself guiltless

She doubts this love that burns within me exhale and it singes my lips
This must be where doves cry so heavily feathers stick to their hips
I've looked beyond the time restraints assessed all the risks
Still goin strong removed the brakes I'll crash into this

And my sweet thing dreams of satin strings where crystal gleams amongst weddings rings So amidst cello strings and hummingbird wings under Gods ceiling that joy I'll bring

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/19/2012 7:48:00 AM
I love it. :0)
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Sha'Ntez Jefferson
Date: 6/20/2012 9:40:00 AM
athank you twanna much appreciated
Date: 6/18/2012 8:19:00 AM
loving the pt2!!
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