How Thou Hast Shaped Me, And Increased My Life

How thou hast shaped me, and increased my life,
     O Rose! Before, I was a squall, a storm
of melancholy and dark, bitter strife:
     a soul already lost like a vile worm

on a dry sidewalk on a hot, sunny day.
     Without hope or joy, without faith or God,
I spiraled, and at risk of losing my way, 
     my hateful heart thought thoughts that none can laud.

But O, dear Rose! Reformed by thee, made whole
     once more by thy bottomless love and wide-browed beauty,
I am a new being fashioned by thy sweet soul,
     and now transformed through thine unwavering fealty.

Rose, my storm was broken up by thy light,
so that I'm no more a worm in God's sight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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