How Sweet the Moonlight Sleeps Upon This Bank

How sweet the moonlight sleeps upon this bank!

   ....delightful she is with beauty

   in her soft (sensual) music, 

   and whispered I in her lilac-garland ear;

With silver-notes upon her feminine spheres,

   longing with lips endowed with love,

   in the cool of blue moon,

   rolling in the bosom of her cosmos;

An immortality in her eyes ----

   an infinitely brief whisk of sugared tress 

   dangling with pecks and smiles,

   " See my dear, "  said I ----

   " heaven has descended upon me "

And the nectar of its finest garden,

   thy cherubin-scent plucked by Aphrodite ----

   (no Aries) .... but a servant compared to thee,

   for none but I upon thy mind, 

And the mysteries of thy smile assure divine providence;

   my very marrow in thy heart,

   not dare I so deserving ----

   for death could lay me down to a long,

   forgotten sleep,

My dreams would still breathe thy ginger wind,

   from lungs delicious thou Goddess springs;

   my little midnight lover, 

   with the wind in her hair....

   thy breath quicker now, with pearl eyes....

And flushed thy moonlight skin,

   gleaming my little darkling rose,

   overwhelmed with love....

Then sleeping sweet upon the moonlit bank,

   how sweet the moonlight sleeps upon this night!



**For the SHAKESPEARE contest***
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lindley Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 9:42 PM
Big congrats on the win my friend!!
Onclaud Avatar
May 22, 2014 at 1:43 AM
just awesome, keith.. special kudos to you for a fine award.. huggs
May Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 6:09 PM
Very good write.... congrats on your win
Torres Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win, KeitH!!! .. very well written poem... Superb!! :O))
A  Avatar
May 21, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Keith, CONGRATS, on your awesome win......~SKAT~
Lindley Avatar
May 20, 2014 at 4:48 PM
Fantastic write!! Congrats on the win my friend. A delightful read and it's sentiment flows ever so smoothly!
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
May 16, 2014 at 7:27 AM
Amazing write! Congratulations on your win! Lori
George   Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 9:42 PM
Such vivid images you convey in this beauty. Many congrat's on your well deserved win, Keith. Lainie
Jerden Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:02 PM
Beautiful sugary-sweet love poem, Keith! Congratulations! I noted one typo (infinately instead of infinitely) Well done! Cheers, Roy
Onclaud Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 11:09 AM
so, this is what moonlight does to you..what a scenic, uplifting poem with such a compelling ending,keith... S for superb!... huggs
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Thanks nette! :-)
Williams Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 4:23 PM
Mark this is excellent, Merchant of Venice my first time with Shakespeare many years ago and still my favourite, good luck....David
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:37 PM
Many thanks Dave!
Devonshire Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 3:30 PM
Ah, "The Merchant of Venice." Had to look it up. This is one of the Shakespeare plays I haven't read. Love the quote though!
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:41 PM
I guess I should have mentioned which play! Glad you enjoyed Carolyn, I'm quite fond of this piece; my friends said it's about time I 'tackled' some Shakespeare -they call me Littlespear all the time! :-)
Devonshire Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 3:28 PM
Dear Keith, Your poem is wonderfully romantic and I can just picture you beneath the moon with your beloved. I am wondering which Shakespeare play your inspiration came. He wrote so many plays and I have enjoyed all of those I've read or seen performed. Perhaps this is a passage I've forgotten from "Romeo and Juliet"? Wishing you success in the contest! (My quote was from Macbeth.) Love, Carolyn
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:43 PM
Glad you enjoyed Carolyn! Love, always, Keith
Callus Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 2:28 PM
Would Shakespeare have done any better!! I doubt it. Top marks for this one, Keith! moonlight sleeps in a most beautiful setting. gl. // paul
O.J. Hunt Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 12:44 PM
Great compliment Paul, I guess the moonlight was right with me when I wrote it!
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 1:13 PM
- A really beautiful poem, Keith - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 11:29 AM
Hello Keith, your poem is with beauty... so relaxing, makes me want to gaze a little more... XOX~ Linda
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