Premiere Contest WinnerHow Sweet It Is: The Word of God

Awesomely sweet is God’s Word* to my soul
Benefiting beyond Milky Way’s role
Curbing cravings for Charleston Chew pleasure
Delightful dainty more than Dove for sure
Enriched with wisdom, not of Smarties load
Fortified to triumph along Rocky Road.
Glazed by divine savor above Pay Day’s
Heavenly taste of Lifesavers with grace
Irresistible midst Heath’s rich flavor  
Joy-source from holiness’ Spree and favor
Kindling activeness more than Kit Kat’s might
Lifting spirit is God’s precept-insight! 
Mouthwatering Mounds can’t surpass Scriptures
Nourishing Now and Later faith-ventures
Over limitless Take 5 service grants
Pleasant, devoid of Starburst sour rants
Quelling stress much better than Skittles
Relishing prayer times midst Nerds-rattles!
Satiating trust-appetite’s fervency
Thrilling not just tongue as does Galaxy
Unmatched are the Lord’s statutes-nourishment 
Value-filled, it exceeds Skor’s fulfillment…
Well-coated with Zero sin-calories 
X-raying heart midst Snicker victories 
Yonder Mr. Good Bar’s yummy cheerfulness
Zooming beyond 100 Grand preciousness!

(Abecedarian and Couplet forms)

*Psalm 119:103 How sweet are thy words unto my taste! yea, sweeter than honey to my mouth! 

Indeed, the Word of God is absolutely sweeter than all those delightful sweets - candies and chocolates- combined (Psalm 119:103). The Lord be thanked, praised, and glorified for making His Word available for our salvation, spiritual growth, sanctification, and service-steadfastness!

October 3, 2018
1st place, "How Sweet It Is" Premier Contest
Sponsored by Carol Connell; judged on 10/16/2018.

This is featured in the book, PS: It's Poetry: An anthology of contemporary poetry from around the world. Paperback – November 27, 2020 by Arczis (Author), PoetrySoup (Author)
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Gauthier Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 6:31 PM
A pleasure to find this well crafted poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology, Beata ~
Fernandez Avatar
October 22, 2018 at 6:40 PM
Wow, that's really good. It's awesome how you combined spiritual with candy. Congrat!
Agustin Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 2:27 AM
Praise God. Thanks for your comments. God bless you. Indeed, the Word of God is absolutely sweeter than all those delightful sweets - candies and chocolates- combined (Psalm 119:103) The Lord be thanked, praised, and glorified for making His Word available for our salvation, spiritual growth, sanctification, and service-steadfastness!
Allison Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 2:35 AM
Many congrats on your win Beata its such a challenging form and you aced it:-) hugs Jan xx
Agustin Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 2:40 AM
Praise God. Thanks for your comments. God bless you.
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Beata. Well done.
Agustin Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 9:48 PM
Praise God. Thanks for your comments. God bless you.
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