How Sweet It Is

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Just a little good ole sweet fun. lol

As I went with my friends MIKE and IKE Like THREE MUSKETEERS we went for a hike Down a ROCKY ROAD we watched for birds Down 5TH AVENUE...we all looked like NERDS To find a DOVE - it paid 100 GRAND But we stopped to watch a MARATHON band They looked like AIR-HEADS, they all had some zits They call themselves the WATCHAMACALITS My friend the SLO-POKE he's a little bit funky He ate too many BOSTON BAKED BEANS...now he is CHUNKY My other friend HEATH left Henry and me In search for some SKITTLES...his sweet tooth SPREE But all that he found, were KIT KAT and SNOW CAPS And some sticky LIFESAVERS he threw down on our laps My name that they call me..is MR. GOOD BAR I'm an old JOLLY RANCHER with a GALAXY car How Sweet It Is Poetry Contest Sponsored by Carol Connell 9/24/2018

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/11/2018 12:36:00 AM

Oh! How sweet it is. All the best.

Curtis Moorman

Date: 10/3/2018 7:54:00 PM

Well, Charlie, danged if this ain't one of the best of the best. Loved reading it. Mr. Good Bar, is it? You sly old Sugar Daddy, (yes, that's one that's not on the list) you really nailed it. Looks like a winner to me!

Charles Messina
Date: 10/9/2018 7:11:00 AM

Hey Curtis, As a kid sugar daddy's and sugar babies were my best finds in my trick or treat bags. Thank you very much. Sorry I've not been too active here lately have my hands full of work. God bless and great to hear from you. Hope all is well...Charlie

Warren Doll

Date: 9/29/2018 8:34:00 AM

Yum-Wonderful write, Charles. Now I'll have to go to the market and get some sweets.~Warren

Charles Messina
Date: 10/9/2018 7:12:00 AM

Pick me up some too on your way..lol Thank you Warren ~Charlie

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/26/2018 7:59:00 PM

G'day Charles …. I enjoyed the theme your poem; it's great. Of course many of the sweet titles are foreign to us down here - thanks Mate - Lindsay

Charles Messina
Date: 10/9/2018 7:14:00 AM

G'day Lindsay, all the same I am sure, a sweet is a sweet and it sure is sweet. Thank you mate - Charlie

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/24/2018 10:55:00 PM

And, I am loving everything about this SWEET TREAT! Awe, and you aren't a NERD. Never Charlie. :) You certainly are a LIFESAVER and a MR. GOOD BAR. This is cute and creative. I must save this delicious poem in my favorites. Thanks for the smile this evening. :) Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 9/27/2018 6:54:00 PM

I completely understand Charlie. Life does come before Poetry. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy

Charles Messina
Date: 9/24/2018 11:09:00 PM

Hi Brandy, sorry I haven’t been busy here on the soup lately I’ve been very busy at work. I’ll be reading up on some of yours and others as soon as I get caught up. Thanks for your sweet and charming comments as always. It’saf midnight here so good night and thanks again. Hugs Charlie