Charles Messina Poet Rhyme

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Just a little good ole sweet fun. lol

How Sweet It Is

As I went with my friends MIKE and IKE 
Like THREE MUSKETEERS we went for a hike 
Down a ROCKY ROAD we watched for birds 
Down 5TH AVENUE...we all looked like NERDS
 
To find a DOVE - it paid 100 GRAND
But we stopped to watch a MARATHON band 
They looked like AIR-HEADS, they all had some zits 
They call themselves the WATCHAMACALITS
 
My friend the SLO-POKE he's a little bit funky 
He ate too many BOSTON BAKED BEANS...now he is CHUNKY 
My other friend HEATH left Henry and me 
In search for some SKITTLES...his sweet tooth SPREE
 
But all that he found, were KIT KAT and SNOW CAPS 
And some sticky LIFESAVERS he threw down on our laps 
My name that they call me..is MR. GOOD BAR
I'm an old JOLLY RANCHER with a GALAXY car 

How Sweet It Is Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Carol Connell 
9/24/2018

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Anisha Dutta October 11, 2018 at 12:36 AM Oh! How sweet it is. All the best.

Curtis Moorman October 3, 2018 at 7:54 PM Well, Charlie, danged if this ain't one of the best of the best. Loved reading it. Mr. Good Bar, is it? You sly old Sugar Daddy, (yes, that's one that's not on the list) you really nailed it. Looks like a winner to me! Charles Messina October 9, 2018 at 7:11 AM Hey Curtis, As a kid sugar daddy's and sugar babies were my best finds in my trick or treat bags. Thank you very much. Sorry I've not been too active here lately have my hands full of work. God bless and great to hear from you. Hope all is well...Charlie

Warren Doll September 29, 2018 at 8:34 AM Yum-Wonderful write, Charles. Now I'll have to go to the market and get some sweets.~Warren Charles Messina October 9, 2018 at 7:12 AM Pick me up some too on your way..lol Thank you Warren ~Charlie

Lindsay Laurie September 26, 2018 at 7:59 PM G'day Charles …. I enjoyed the theme your poem; it's great. Of course many of the sweet titles are foreign to us down here - thanks Mate - Lindsay Charles Messina October 9, 2018 at 7:14 AM G'day Lindsay, all the same I am sure, a sweet is a sweet and it sure is sweet. Thank you mate - Charlie

Brandy Nicole September 24, 2018 at 10:55 PM And, I am loving everything about this SWEET TREAT! Awe, and you aren't a NERD. Never Charlie. :) You certainly are a LIFESAVER and a MR. GOOD BAR. This is cute and creative. I must save this delicious poem in my favorites. Thanks for the smile this evening. :) Brandy Brandy Nicole September 27, 2018 at 6:54 PM I completely understand Charlie. Life does come before Poetry. Many wonderful blessings to you. Hugs, Brandy Charles Messina September 24, 2018 at 11:09 PM Hi Brandy, sorry I haven’t been busy here on the soup lately I’ve been very busy at work. I’ll be reading up on some of yours and others as soon as I get caught up. Thanks for your sweet and charming comments as always. It’saf midnight here so good night and thanks again. Hugs Charlie