- How Should I Say Stop -

Do you have a golden pen
                                      One who is your best friend
                                        Almost like a magic pen
                                A pen to help you with difficult words
                                     and believe you at your word

                                     A pen who only want you well 
                                              and never says:
                                            "I can not tonight"
                                       A golden pen is a pen that
                                           only have positive ink

                                       That pen writes and writes
                                         then you forget yourself
                                            No tears nor doubt
                                      now the pen and I are a team

                                      Help....how should I say: STOP





30.04-2012
A-L Andresen :)
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Sergi Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:12 PM
Hi Anne Lise: Simplicity and Beauty. My compliments.
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January 28, 2016 at 3:48 PM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Ralph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Chand Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Great poem...simple but then conveys a lot
Andresen Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 3:47 PM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Ravneel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sejal Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 3:06 AM
hello Anne Lisa , This Sejal M here ,such a beautiful poem , when u first commented on my first poem it felt gr8 thanks 4 ur appreciation and ur poem is really good.......
Andresen Avatar
November 1, 2012 at 11:22 AM
Sejal, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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November 1, 2012 at 3:07 AM
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September 29, 2012 at 4:15 AM
:)))).this is really cool..love yur work :)))))..jim
Andresen Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 8:04 AM
Jim, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Biggs Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 11:22 AM
A magic pen, cool...like true dream. Thanks for the read Anne. "write on"
Andresen Avatar
May 31, 2012 at 11:25 AM
Marrio, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Poet Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 12:12 PM
I want such a pen now Anne.Enjoyed the read.
Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 12:24 PM
I send one to you kash. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Gainous Avatar
May 20, 2012 at 7:43 PM
My pen ran out of ink! LOL but Great Poem!:) Looking forward to more!
Andresen Avatar
May 21, 2012 at 2:52 AM
Tania, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Aderounmu Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 11:55 AM
Never say stop... I luv this piece in the pot of poetrysoup. Lise oxox
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 12:25 PM
- oxox love Anne-Lise
Aderounmu Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 11:51 AM
Never say stop... I luv this piece in the pot of poetrysoup. Lise oxox
Andresen Avatar
May 15, 2012 at 11:54 AM
Fisayo, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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May 10, 2012 at 11:20 AM
Anne-lise, I wish I had a pen like that... I don't think I would say 'stop'... just go, go, go ... Thank you for your kind words about my poem... coming from such a prolific poetess, it is quite an honor... :- ) Terry
Andresen Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 4:46 AM
Terry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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May 5, 2012 at 8:35 AM
Your Pen friend is so nice that I have no words to thank it and your Pen friend except with my heart, because you are lucky one. I have not met yet, just trying on the way. You are lucky and be lucky always and I pray to God for you to be always lucky and never say ................STOP..........., Thanks for this inner depth, loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 8:40 AM
bl. - thank you for visit and sweet comments on my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Hunter Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 4:43 PM
Never stop! I wonder do I have this golden pen? Excellent poem, Anne! Lots of love -Caleb
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 4:46 PM
Caleb, thank you for visit and comments me today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 4:46 PM
Yes, you have a golden pen. - A-L
Neels Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 1:07 PM
I would say why stop Anne Lise, especially with the joy you share here in the Soup.. Enjoy the weekend ahead :) love Wilma xx
Andresen Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 1:10 PM
Wilma, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Ball Avatar
May 4, 2012 at 12:17 PM
thank you for commentsI have to say that this poem of yours I do like that is why I rated this one a seven, God bless but realize that I'm a Holy Spirit writer and any gift I've received is from the Lord and the Holy Spirit. God bless
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May 4, 2012 at 12:34 PM
Robert, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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May 4, 2012 at 6:20 AM
Never stop ! *smiles* Great write dear poet ! Have a blessed day....much love, james
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May 4, 2012 at 6:25 AM
James, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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May 3, 2012 at 10:46 PM
hahahahah...this is so fun..you and your pen are like Bonnie and Clyde! Here's how you say stop....unplug your computer and hide your poetry notebook...after you go insane, typically after about 8 hrs with me, beg your husband to give it all back to you as he didnt tell you where he hid it! hhaahahah...Gwendolen
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 11:38 PM
Gwen, thank you for visit, smile and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Johnson Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 3:42 PM
Kindness makes the pen flow easy. Unkindness makes you question why. Some call it a writers block. Unkindness can make that magic pen go dry.
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 11:37 PM
Robert, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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May 3, 2012 at 4:20 AM
nice write. I dont know if i would call my pen golden but there is one that i love to use much of the time - JH
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2012 at 5:01 AM
:) - J.H. - Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Freeman Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 5:23 PM
I've enjoyed the blend of golden pen, Anne. Go ahead on, Smile, Thanks for stopping by. Agape, Moses
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 11:23 PM
John, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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May 2, 2012 at 2:23 PM
Your pen is wonderful, never stop and thanks Anne Lise for all your wonderful comments on my poetry
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 2:27 PM
B.B. - Thank you for visit and comments on my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Palli Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 1:31 PM
excellent! enjoyed it
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 1:33 PM
Susan, thank you for visit and comments my poem today. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Nair Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 10:25 AM
May your golden pen continue to write on and on pouring forth magical lines,xoxo, jag
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 12:43 PM
Jag. - thank you for visit and comments my poem. -oxox love Anne-Lise
Austin Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 6:53 AM
This pen is enchanted by the muse. I have no solution. Enjoyed mucho. Love, daver
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 7:11 AM
I dont have my lapptop in bed at night - Thank you Daver for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Horsman Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 6:52 AM
No do not stop, Anne Lise, this golden pen held by a golden hand and mind. harry
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 7:09 AM
Harry, thank you for comments and visit. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Farmer Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 6:18 AM
I think the muse tells the pen when to stop not the writer, and dear old muse is not always considerate of time and place is she? Excellent write Anne-Lise.
Andresen Avatar
May 2, 2012 at 7:08 AM
I write best in night (in bed) then my pen is magic...lol... Jemmy, thank you for visit and comments my poem . - oxox love Anne-Lise
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