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How Shocking 

Two neighbors gossiped over an electric fence and were shocked at the news...

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/10/2016 5:58:00 PM
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I like the joke in it!! Congrats, my friend.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 2/10/2016 1:26:00 PM
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really clever,tim.. sweet congrats on your award!..huggs
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Carrie Richards
Date: 2/9/2016 5:29:00 PM
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You are always one to have a "spark" of wit!!! LOL !!
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Date: 2/9/2016 4:11:00 PM
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Tim, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "How Shocking" if You like... AN honor to have you support my contest. ~LINDA~
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Susan Gentry
Date: 2/9/2016 3:54:00 PM
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Funny, cleverly done! Like it. A 7 - Congratulations on your win.
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Timothy Hicks
Date: 10/25/2014 12:23:00 AM
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EGAD! Very clever, Tim! I do remember you were the King of one-liners... your title sparked my attention.
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Gary Bateman
Date: 10/12/2014 1:31:00 PM
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Tim, What an epigram here. I guess this means the two neighbors are talking anymore (and living for that matter). A really neat approach to a "shocking subject." Cheers, Gary
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 9/25/2014 9:05:00 AM
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A very punny piece. I was electrified by the write!
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Monterey Sirak
Date: 9/18/2014 8:04:00 AM
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Your one-liners are great! Thank you for commenting on Frugiferous and making it a favorite.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/11/2014 10:37:00 PM
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hey, you are on an epigram kick@! So that is what they are, just one liners then?
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 9/11/2014 11:24:00 AM
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Awesome! Right to the point and shockingly funny! Lol.... Best wishes! xxxx D.
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Gene Bourne
Date: 9/11/2014 1:09:00 AM
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Clever use of electricity in this faceted, interesting short composition. I enjoyed...Your PS friend...Gene.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 9/10/2014 11:57:00 PM
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How awesome to be entertained by one single line. Very clever.
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Tim Smith
Date: 9/10/2014 7:59:00 PM
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funny..lol
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Ilene Bauer
Date: 9/10/2014 7:22:00 PM
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ha! very funny, tim!
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