How Shocking

Two neighbors gossiped over an electric fence and were shocked at the news...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Dietrich Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:58 PM
I like the joke in it!! Congrats, my friend.
Onclaud Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 1:26 PM
really clever,tim.. sweet congrats on your award!..huggs
Richards Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 5:29 PM
You are always one to have a "spark" of wit!!! LOL !!
A   Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Tim, Congratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my latest blog "How Shocking" if You like... AN honor to have you support my contest. ~LINDA~
Gentry Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Funny, cleverly done! Like it. A 7 - Congratulations on your win.
Hicks Avatar
October 25, 2014 at 12:23 AM
EGAD! Very clever, Tim! I do remember you were the King of one-liners... your title sparked my attention.
Bateman Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 1:31 PM
Tim, What an epigram here. I guess this means the two neighbors are talking anymore (and living for that matter). A really neat approach to a "shocking subject." Cheers, Gary
Lamoureux Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 9:05 AM
A very punny piece. I was electrified by the write!
Sirak Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 8:04 AM
Your one-liners are great! Thank you for commenting on Frugiferous and making it a favorite.
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 10:37 PM
hey, you are on an epigram kick@! So that is what they are, just one liners then?
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:24 AM
Awesome! Right to the point and shockingly funny! Lol.... Best wishes! xxxx D.
Bourne Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 1:09 AM
Clever use of electricity in this faceted, interesting short composition. I enjoyed...Your PS friend...Gene.
Johnson Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 11:57 PM
How awesome to be entertained by one single line. Very clever.
Smith Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 7:59 PM
funny..lol
Bauer Avatar
September 10, 2014 at 7:22 PM
ha! very funny, tim!
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