How Shall I Write For You Tonight

How shall I write for you tonight when the words don't seem to flow? I could write about the moon and the stars and how, to you, they don't compare to those starry caramel eyes that look deep inside of me wrap around my sated heart and fill my life with glee I could write about your killer smile that brightens my every thought that gives me strength to carry on when sad or when distraught I could write about your compassion your powerful soul or your caring heart I could tell you how much I love you and how we'll never be apart I could verse a poem about how I admire who you are your virtues, values, giving of your time what you stand for or how I'm proud to call you mine I could write a song that would praise your love of God the less fortunate, His children and all of those in need. How can I possibly write a worthy poem that sings praises high enough of you when all you do seems right and just and your intentions are so true. Tonight I'll try to write my sweet of one who strives to rid the world of hurt So I'll close my eyes and picture you and hope I find the words
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Chircop Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 5:55 AM
More than words you did write. She's gonna blush with all this praise..This is a beauty that makes me 'Speechless' : ). A favourite.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2015 at 2:06 AM
Tim, sweet romantic poem that somehow puts me to the times when he says he likes to write a poem for me.. :D~Olive ELoisa.. =`)
Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 10:33 PM
Just close your eyes and keep thinking of those caramel eyes, Tim!!
Godwin Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 5:20 PM
I love the flow, the rhyme, the content. Truly, to me, a beautiful poem. Oh - I just have to ask, why one period after the word 'stars?' This one is a keeper, Tim ... CayCay
Smith Avatar
September 22, 2015 at 5:27 PM
Thank you CayCay. The period was missed in the editing. Thanks for catching that....Tim
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