How Nice of You To Call

A manic man sits, evenly, confined, conscious, in his four cornered room.  His cell phone 
rings and violently vibrates! The terrible tone slashed and sliced the serene silence he had 
been anticipating all afternoon.  It was her! The one he was trying to ignore.  He could feel 
her presence, penetrating, trying to get through phone. “Why is she calling—why now?” He 
pondered and mused.  He began to curse the moment and what it had become. He felt his 
body burst in to two and a ritualistic battle ensued, between two beings deep within his core. 
One beseeches him to pick up the phone, while the other tells him no.  

Then it rang again, even louder than before!! It made his temperature soar, his body 
burned, and his hands began to sweat.  He rubbed them on his khaki pants so hard, that his 
legs nearly went numb.  Not before long, his whole body was wet, with sweat, saturating his 
clothes so he tore them off.  Soaking wet, he reluctantly reached for the phone. It rang 
again, even louder than the two before!!!  He created a fist and put it through a wall.

His mind, stalled. He looked at her number, emblazoned on his phone, flashing like a 
billboard—advertising lies, the same ones he’s seen and bought, over and over, a hundred 
thousand times. He knew if he talked, his hell would remain the same, so he tried to stay 
dry, and remain somewhat sane.  As he waited for his vigilant voicemail to save the day, it 
rang once again, much…much louder than before!!!! He covered his ears only to feel the 
drums of war, beating, pounding, profoundly in his chest.  The battle was long and his insides 
raged on.  He started to feel himself finally losing grip, of a stronger, sturdier, “A brand new 
self!” But as the milliseconds ticked on, he found himself reverting back, to a weaker, worn-
out, “I can’t stand myself.” He had agreed that no matter how much he groaned—he was not 
to pick up the phone! So he shouted, and then he screamed! Then another vicious ring 
brought the man cascading to his knees.  

All hope—gone, the battle—lost. With the white flag waved, he gave one last huff, and one 
last puff and politely said “hello…”

Submitted for Rambling's "Act I, SceneI" contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 11/24/2013 11:17:00 AM
Hello Mike, ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Enjoy the new coming week, and Thanksgiving Holiday.. Always a poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 11/22/2013 11:14:00 AM
Mike, , Congratulations on having your poem Featured this week. Loving ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/2/2010 1:31:00 PM
Hey Mike, Congratulations on your win in the contest! I've asked Audrey to post this comment on my behalf ....Jimmy
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Date: 3/1/2010 9:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in ARPoet's "Act One Scene One" Contest ~MIke~. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/1/2010 12:48:00 AM
It is time for the final curtain call and you are standing tall on stage! Congratulations Mike Butler, for your win in the Rambling Poet’s “Act I, Scene I” poetry contest. (Ring!...Ring! LOL) Enjoy the limelight! You deserve it. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 2/28/2010 7:38:00 PM
Congrats Mike on your winning poem in Constance's contest.. a most excellent write and a wonderful win for u to so enjoy..luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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Date: 2/19/2010 10:42:00 AM
I love this. =] Very nice and detailed -Echo
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Date: 2/18/2010 4:44:00 PM
Wow, I really like YOUR entry. It's full of drama. I hope you score high. About my spring poem, I find it unusual your favorite stanza was my least favorite. I am a very visual person for poetry and even though the message of that line was the best, I thought visually it was the least impressive. Glad you liked it anyway! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/17/2010 7:41:00 AM
Very interesting writing today Mike. It was a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing it with us here at PoetrySoup. Wishing you the best in the contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/16/2010 5:34:00 PM
Great job!! brings back memories!! Hope you win!
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