how my first poem was born

my teenage fancy
that flooded like pure honey
spilt, in ecstasy
on a white sheet, full of glee
as a drop of poetry

simile smiled in it
metaphors mingled well knit
with nature's fine script
nooks of my soul seemed grace-lit
has poetry found me fit?
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Buehler Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 5:32 PM
Your poetic awakening is so beautifully depicted. Love the images! Congratulations on your win.
Alex Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 6:44 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 12:49 PM
Mingling with similes and metaphors!Congrats!
Alex Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 6:44 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 12:24 PM
Very nice imagery. Congrats, Chris
Alex Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 6:43 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Brul Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 7:12 PM
Tom is right. The spark that gave birth to our first poem is really unforgettable. Thank you for sharing your magical poetic journey. Congratulations. Stay creative.^___^ JCB
Alex Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 7:58 PM
Thank you very much for giving me this opportunity. May God Bless You!
Cunningham Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 3:09 AM
We can all remember the spark that gave us our first poem. Good luck in the contest Christuraj. Tom
Alex Avatar
December 5, 2024 at 3:27 AM
Thank you very much. I have read your poem also. It's very grand. Wish you all the best. May God Bless You!
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