Saba Khan Poet Rhyme

How It Feels

In the lap of Mother,Nobody's there
Her fingers will never play in his hair
A pair of shoes she'd bought,waiting at the meal
Bleeding legs..cut feet..Murdered He returns,How it feels?

If the only voice you hear,is of Gun's fire
And people won't help saying ''You're a liar''
How it feels If your father meets his foe?
If his tongue is cut,Bleeding from head to toe?

If the only thing you see around is The Blood
What If somebody there your own is Dead!?
If your mother is dragged in the streets by her hair
How it feels If nobody stands up to help her there?

Innocents dying daily,Palestine dying to live!
Pity..Pity that you don't even have time to give!
It's not about Religion but 'bout Humanity!
Wake up!! Raise you Voice for Humanity's safety! 

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Written for the HUMANS of Palestine.
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Poetess: Saba Khan
Contest: Make Me Cry
---Pakistan!

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Beata Agustin December 8, 2024 at 11:17 PM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A March 17, 2016 at 12:16 AM saba khan, i love to read poems more than once it helps me capture the hidden messages and refference the meaaning of the poem i didnt see the first time..

Skat A January 14, 2016 at 11:14 PM SABA, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **

M. Shahid H. Chouhdry September 7, 2015 at 10:42 PM Perfectly written in a an exquisite manner. Beautiful thoughts. Nice upload.

Abidemi Oyewole February 9, 2015 at 5:25 AM A real wake up call, to reach out to the human sensitivity that long eluDes us, we shall overcomE...true ingenuity

Nathan D. December 5, 2014 at 7:36 AM if that doesn't make people cry then they don't have any humanity.

Liam Mcdaid October 22, 2014 at 5:48 PM this is deep touching excellent piece this world has a lot to answer to tears of the innocence powerful pen saba

Eileen Manassian August 7, 2014 at 8:19 AM We will one day be held accountable for letting these things happen, Saba. Truly a powerful write here. You worded it so well...One can feel the anguish and pain. Bless you. Saba Khan August 8, 2014 at 4:02 AM Thank you :) In shaa Allah! :)

Poet Destroyer A July 31, 2014 at 12:35 AM anytime

Richard Lamoureux July 30, 2014 at 7:43 AM So much pain on both sides of this conflict. It is hard to believe that once Abraham was the father of both nations. Truly brother against brother. It is impossible to find a resolution when both sides are right. This is a very powerful piece and my heart indeed cry's out for the innocent on both sides of the conflict.

Moein Jr July 29, 2014 at 3:10 PM Dear Saba Khan, god bless you for the gift you presented to our Palestinian brothers as solidarity.Viva Palestine! Saba Khan July 30, 2014 at 11:32 AM Thank you! Just wanted to tell that we're supporting you in this war!! May Allah keep you all safe! Ameen

Poet Destroyer A July 27, 2014 at 9:11 PM Saba, a heartfelt poem. The topic is a soft one. I'm touched by your voice. The beauty of Humanity should rise once more.. Wishing you luck..Linda Saba Khan July 30, 2014 at 11:32 AM Thank you Lind :) :)

Joseph Gaydon July 27, 2014 at 1:49 AM deep

Hina Nasir July 26, 2014 at 10:13 AM no saba it is posible that humans can support war ...imagine urself...to save our own homeland ... to getrid of rivals ..wont we set their home on fire to sav ours? ofcourse we wud... hmm hope u got it wat i meant :-)))))))))))))))))))) tc chilx Saba Khan July 26, 2014 at 6:20 PM Yeah but in this case they are sending their troops on ANOTHER land and burning 'em up

Rev. Elizabeth Anderson July 26, 2014 at 9:45 AM Saba, such emotions, beautifully expressed.also thank you for your comments on my poem. Blessings Saba Khan July 26, 2014 at 6:19 PM Thank you :)

Hina Nasir July 25, 2014 at 3:56 PM SABA this is spellbinding ...seriously ..im suffering through words insufficiency to tell you how you have depicted our affliction ..waaaaaaaaaaaaaaow ... exactly ...we tremble just looking at them and scared of a thought that how it feels...ah may Allah get them out of their misery and painful time..ah :-/ Saba Khan July 26, 2014 at 8:57 AM Yeah right! I just don't understand one thing that how can HUMANS support wars?? Ridiculous!

Gry Christensen July 25, 2014 at 12:21 PM Lots of strong emotions and spelling out of pain how it is...............desperate, raw, without mercy, cruel............. I really like the last two lines, because of the truth in them! Best of luck in the competition! Saba Khan July 25, 2014 at 1:13 PM Thank you for your words!

Anne-Lise Andresen July 25, 2014 at 11:52 AM - See the truth in the eyes ...... very well written - heartbreaking poem, Saba! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Saba Khan July 25, 2014 at 1:13 PM Thank you for your words!

Dan Kearley July 25, 2014 at 10:04 AM The pain of these words does not go un-noticed! It is felt by others also... Your words are a shout to every ear that hears. Saba Khan July 25, 2014 at 1:13 PM Thank you for your words!