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How Incomplete Am I

The thought it is when I shut the light, You besides me cuddling through the night. This moment of separation has got me thinking tonight, Without you, O girl, how incomplete am I, Come soon baby to be by my side.. I long to have a normal day, Where you wait for me to have dinner the same way.. Days of peace and somewhere in between fights, I always knew you'll be so right for things you dream for us to rise; To foresee the things you're so gifted and wise.. Without you, oh dear..oh love, how incomplete am I; Come soon baby to be by my side.. It's hard to fill the space within, I know my love you've been trudging, Baby I fail to wrap the feelings within; I wish you here and there's no gap between.. Without you my lady how lost am I, Come soon baby to be by my side, Without you my love how incomplete am I.. VijayG

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Date: 10/15/2020 7:18:00 AM
Very emotional, we all feel incomplete without a loved one...
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Vijay Galia
Date: 10/15/2020 9:32:00 AM
Dear Silent one, I don't know if you are he/she, But your work makes me smile with glee.. May I know your name if you please? Thank you very much for your acknowledgement !!
Date: 10/15/2020 5:39:00 AM
Your poem gives voice to the emotions felt when missing a loved one..well done, Vijay.
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Vijay Galia
Date: 10/15/2020 5:50:00 AM
Thank you Vijayji :)

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