How I Miss Fall

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January 18, 2025, placed 8th in Brian Strand's 2025 Posted Short Form Contest

January 25, 2025, placed 1st in Line Gauthier's Bite Size Contest 98

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Gone is autumn gold. Winter winds howl, loud and bold. Sun can’t fight the cold. Jack Frost sits upon his throne, bound to chill us to the bone.

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David Crandall

Date: 1/27/2025 10:25:00 AM

I like the way these words fit together - great poem and congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2025 11:44:00 PM

TFS and congrats on your great win

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/20/2025 11:43:00 AM

Thanks so much, Andrea. Janice

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/17/2025 11:23:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your fun write. Fall is a great time of the year. I also love it. Jack Frost will be gone in a few weeks, then spring then summer. Do not worry it will be back before you know it. Have a fun day as you write away..................

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/17/2025 9:19:00 PM

Thanks so much, Paula. Here, in the Deep South~~Mississippi~~we had several inches of snow last week. Today it was 60 degrees. Next week~~lows in the teens; highs, below freezing. Good old Mississippi :-) Janice

Deb M

Date: 1/17/2025 10:17:00 AM

Hi Janice….love this seasonal poem! Well written! Debx

Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/17/2025 9:16:00 PM

Thanks so much, Deb. Here (in north Mississippi), some areas got 8 inches of snow last Friday. it was 60 degrees today. Next week the highs are sub-freezing. "Jack Frost" is winning! Janice