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How I Feel When I Fall Asleep

Feeling over tired
unable to keep awake
I go to my bedroom
My eyes burning

I am in deep slumber
When my head meets pillow
Now my eyes are closed
I have fallen asleep

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Sarah Wachira

April 15, 2021 at 10:18 PM

Hello Darlene I love your poem.. you know sometimes when you're stressed out it difficult to sleep actually you hardly sleep

Darlene De Beaulieu

April 18, 2021 at 3:19 PM

Hello Sarah Wachira, you are right. When i am stressed i find it hard to sleep. Yes hardly sleep. Enjoy your evening my friend.

J. Summers

March 18, 2021 at 9:12 AM

Sometimes it works that way for me but not often enough. An off/on switch would be nice. John

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 18, 2021 at 12:10 PM

Hello John Summers, when i am overtired i fall asleep right away. Other times I use a sleepy tea like lavender to make me sleep. Enjoy your day my friend.

Alexis Y.

March 16, 2021 at 10:47 AM

Hi Darlene, After a long day, sleep is needed:-) Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 16, 2021 at 3:03 PM

Hello Alexis Y. yes sleep is needed after a long day. enjoy your evening my friend.

Gordon Mcconnell

March 14, 2021 at 1:27 PM

Very well penned Darlene, an enjoyable write. Blessings,Gordon

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 14, 2021 at 6:26 PM

Hello Gordon hi! i hope all is well with you. T you for the lovely comment. Thank you for a lovely comment. enjoy your evening my friend.

Dennis Spilchuk

March 14, 2021 at 1:03 PM

Welcoming sleep is a beautiful asset. Nicely expressed.

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 14, 2021 at 6:28 PM

Hello Denis Spilchuk, yes a welcoming sleep is a beautiful asset. Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your evening my friend..

M. L. Kiser

March 13, 2021 at 5:17 PM

Lapsing into unconsciousness...she sleeps. Nicely done.

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 14, 2021 at 5:23 AM

Hello M.L .Kiser, yes ! you got it.! Enjoy your day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

March 12, 2021 at 12:59 PM

Enjoyed!

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 12, 2021 at 4:07 PM

Hello Kim, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Judy Ball

March 12, 2021 at 12:47 PM

Sweet dreams Darlene. When I'm that tired I don't think I dream. It just seems like morning came too soon. God Bless, JB Good write.

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 12, 2021 at 4:08 PM

Hello Judy, When i am that tired i am in a deep sleep. Feelinf refresh until morning. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Harry Horsman

March 11, 2021 at 10:44 PM

Sweet dreams dear Darlene. Lovely poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 12, 2021 at 7:33 AM

Hello Harry Horseman, thank you my good friend. Enjoy your day my friend.

Gershon Wolf

March 11, 2021 at 6:14 PM

Glad to hear that you fall asleep right away, Darlene. As for me, don't ask! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 12, 2021 at 7:30 AM

Hello Gershon, yes i fall asleep , but at times i do need help. So i drink a sleepy tea. Which does help me. Enjoy your day my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

March 11, 2021 at 12:16 PM

It's rare for me not to sleep quickly enough. Unless I feel stressed. Lovely poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 11, 2021 at 12:47 PM

Hello Victor, Thank you Victor, Enjoy your day my friend.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

March 11, 2021 at 5:03 AM

Very lucky you are! This is how we should all sleep. Love ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 11, 2021 at 5:48 AM

Hello Mala, yes this is all of should fall asleep. i agree. Love Darlene

Caren Krutsinger

March 10, 2021 at 6:35 PM

I can relate to this; my sleeping pattern is down two, up three, which is really odd.

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 11, 2021 at 5:53 AM

Hello Caren, Sometimes i have trouble to fall asleep. When i do I drink tea to make me sleepy. hugs Darlene

Andrea Dietrich

March 10, 2021 at 5:20 PM

You are lucky. If I do that, I wake back up 45 min. later and still need to take the good old sleeping pill. I sure wish I had the ability to STAY asleep like when I was younger. Count your blessings you can do this, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 11, 2021 at 5:55 AM

Hello Andrea, it would be nice to sleep like when we were younger. Now our sleeping pattern has changed. Hugs, Darlene

Victor Buhagiar

March 9, 2021 at 11:15 PM

That's what I do almost everyday. I never go to bed early.

Darlene De Beaulieu

March 10, 2021 at 10:22 AM

Hello Victor, Victor I do not go to bed early either. If i am very tired , I will not go to bed early because I would be awake not able to sleep. Enjoy your day my friend.