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How I Feel When I Fall Asleep

Feeling over tired unable to keep awake I go to my bedroom My eyes burning I am in deep slumber When my head meets pillow Now my eyes are closed I have fallen asleep

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Sarah Wachira

Date: 4/15/2021 10:18:00 PM

Hello Darlene I love your poem.. you know sometimes when you're stressed out it difficult to sleep actually you hardly sleep

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2021 3:19:00 PM

Hello Sarah Wachira, you are right. When i am stressed i find it hard to sleep. Yes hardly sleep. Enjoy your evening my friend.

J. Summers

Date: 3/18/2021 9:12:00 AM

Sometimes it works that way for me but not often enough. An off/on switch would be nice. John

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/18/2021 12:10:00 PM

Hello John Summers, when i am overtired i fall asleep right away. Other times I use a sleepy tea like lavender to make me sleep. Enjoy your day my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/16/2021 10:47:00 AM

Hi Darlene, After a long day, sleep is needed:-) Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/16/2021 3:03:00 PM

Hello Alexis Y. yes sleep is needed after a long day. enjoy your evening my friend.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 3/14/2021 1:27:00 PM

Very well penned Darlene, an enjoyable write. Blessings,Gordon

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2021 6:26:00 PM

Hello Gordon hi! i hope all is well with you. T you for the lovely comment. Thank you for a lovely comment. enjoy your evening my friend.

Dennis Spilchuk

Date: 3/14/2021 1:03:00 PM

Welcoming sleep is a beautiful asset. Nicely expressed.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2021 6:28:00 PM

Hello Denis Spilchuk, yes a welcoming sleep is a beautiful asset. Thank you for the lovely comment. enjoy your evening my friend..

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/13/2021 5:17:00 PM

Lapsing into unconsciousness...she sleeps. Nicely done.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2021 5:23:00 AM

Hello M.L .Kiser, yes ! you got it.! Enjoy your day my friend.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/12/2021 12:59:00 PM

Enjoyed!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2021 4:07:00 PM

Hello Kim, thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 3/12/2021 12:47:00 PM

Sweet dreams Darlene. When I'm that tired I don't think I dream. It just seems like morning came too soon. God Bless, JB Good write.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2021 4:08:00 PM

Hello Judy, When i am that tired i am in a deep sleep. Feelinf refresh until morning. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/11/2021 10:44:00 PM

Sweet dreams dear Darlene. Lovely poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2021 7:33:00 AM

Hello Harry Horseman, thank you my good friend. Enjoy your day my friend.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/11/2021 6:14:00 PM

Glad to hear that you fall asleep right away, Darlene. As for me, don't ask! :) gw

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2021 7:30:00 AM

Hello Gershon, yes i fall asleep , but at times i do need help. So i drink a sleepy tea. Which does help me. Enjoy your day my friend.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/11/2021 12:16:00 PM

It's rare for me not to sleep quickly enough. Unless I feel stressed. Lovely poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2021 12:47:00 PM

Hello Victor, Thank you Victor, Enjoy your day my friend.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/11/2021 5:03:00 AM

Very lucky you are! This is how we should all sleep. Love ~ Mala

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2021 5:48:00 AM

Hello Mala, yes this is all of should fall asleep. i agree. Love Darlene

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/10/2021 6:35:00 PM

I can relate to this; my sleeping pattern is down two, up three, which is really odd.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2021 5:53:00 AM

Hello Caren, Sometimes i have trouble to fall asleep. When i do I drink tea to make me sleepy. hugs Darlene

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/10/2021 5:20:00 PM

You are lucky. If I do that, I wake back up 45 min. later and still need to take the good old sleeping pill. I sure wish I had the ability to STAY asleep like when I was younger. Count your blessings you can do this, Darlene!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2021 5:55:00 AM

Hello Andrea, it would be nice to sleep like when we were younger. Now our sleeping pattern has changed. Hugs, Darlene

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/9/2021 11:15:00 PM

That's what I do almost everyday. I never go to bed early.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/10/2021 10:22:00 AM

Hello Victor, Victor I do not go to bed early either. If i am very tired , I will not go to bed early because I would be awake not able to sleep. Enjoy your day my friend.

P.S. Awtry

Date: 3/9/2021 6:14:00 PM

The sign of a clear conscience I believe. Hope you are getting plenty of rest :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/10/2021 10:25:00 AM

Hello P.S. Awtry, yes thank you. I do not go to bed early. I would not be able to fall asleep If I did. Enjoy your day my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/9/2021 5:13:00 PM

I can relate to this, feeling tired tonight. I look forward to the rest you wrote so well about. Goodnight Darlene :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/10/2021 10:27:00 AM

Hello Heidi, I hope you get the rest you need. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/9/2021 4:06:00 PM

Love that time of day when my head hits the pillow. In about fifteen minutes from now lol. Hope you're well Darlene. Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/10/2021 10:28:00 AM

Hello Tom Cunningham, Yes I am thank you my frien. I hope you are well to. Enjoy your day my friend.