How I Feel Today

More than wife, sister, daughter, grandma – I wear many hats!
Close friends have I; on the phone or online we have chats..
Not wealthy, but rich in love and joy am I, and that’s
                    how I feel today!

I remember in my youth, life was a juicy plum
ready for the taking! I dreamed for my prince to come.
Breathless, I found him. Forsaken, I moved on; life was different from
                    how I feel today!

Heavier emotions in my later life began.
Not easy– testing positive on a cancer scan.
However, I now can say, I’ve felt so much worse than
                    how I feel today!

My childhood was lovely though I’ve bid my youth adieu.
What destiny will bring me, I’ll have to see it through,
for I realize all the good and bad has led me to
                    how I feel today!

May 13, 2018 for the "Rhyme And Refrain" Poetry Contest of Broken Wings

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Date: 6/2/2018 5:53:00 PM
What a powerful write. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal, Andrea. A gem.
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Date: 5/17/2018 11:34:00 PM
Hey there friend congratulations on your 1st place poem
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Date: 5/16/2018 1:09:00 PM
beautiful piece, lovely all round
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Date: 5/16/2018 8:09:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this beautifully penned poem, love how you used the theme, well done ~
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Date: 5/15/2018 7:26:00 PM
Andrea, I'm very impressed with the way you incorporated your refrain into the last line of the stanzas. A wonderful write.
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Date: 5/15/2018 5:39:00 PM
Back to say congrats, Andrea, nicely done.
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Date: 5/15/2018 6:05:00 AM
Nice flowing poem, Andrea. Congrats.
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Date: 5/14/2018 8:37:00 PM
Congrats on your top win Andrea..
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Date: 5/14/2018 6:55:00 PM
Exceptional, inspirational, genius! Congratulations on your well-deserved 1st place. Mick
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Date: 5/14/2018 3:43:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st-place trophy winner, esp. in such a competitive contest. Kudos, O Poet! :) gw
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Date: 5/14/2018 3:35:00 PM
Excellent inspirational piece that deserves its place at the head of the line! Life experiences certainly lead us to where we are in life today. Congratulations, dear Andie on your exceptional win! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 5/14/2018 2:36:00 PM
Wow, Andrea! A glimpse into your life and resulting attitude. Congratulations on your #1 win. Amazing talent you have. Enjoyed this. A fave.
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Date: 5/14/2018 2:27:00 PM
I shouldn't be surprised you finished on top. This is so well-written.
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Date: 5/13/2018 1:24:00 PM
We’ve all gone through trials and tribulations to get to where we are today and life is good. Happy Mother’s Day my friend. John
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Date: 5/13/2018 12:35:00 PM
- A little story from both good and sad experiences, Andrea - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/13/2018 12:30:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this story of life well lived..amid loving family and friends. Your poem flows well with rhythmic rhyme and refrain..a great entry for the contest, Andrea.
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Date: 5/13/2018 10:48:00 AM
Ah - the hopes of youth - which fade all too fast! Today my mind was drifting back to the Greenwich Village poetry readings I used to go to. They were a lot of fun.But i guess I am not that "cool" anymore. I had cancer myself a while back. Met a new woman the other day - Jewish!! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/13/2018 10:28:00 AM
Wonderfully expressed Andrea. Once we learn to make friends with and accept our past, we can find inner peace and life becomes a lot more enjoyable, IMO I really like this one. Happy Mother's Day!
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Date: 5/13/2018 10:27:00 AM
New experience yet to come...thankful for the good and bad overcomed...All the best Andrea
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