How I Feel About Picnics

ants in my food
wood ticks eating on my back
want to picnic honey?
sure why not
The birds haven't put their white goo in my hair yet
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Hawkins Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 8:00 PM
Ha! Will you be picnicking again soon, Caren. Loved the clever poem still smiling.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 3:31 AM
I will not
Poet Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 11:08 AM
A wonderful poem that is both pretty and witty. Caren, best wishes for the future.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 3:31 AM
Thank you Lasaad
Hankins Avatar
July 16, 2021 at 8:48 AM
Especially clever, Caren. You certainly made your point...pointedly.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 3:31 AM
I was only given so many words
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July 16, 2021 at 8:28 AM
Funny, clever - a delightful read. Best wishes, Caren. Cheers, Brian
Krutsinger Avatar
July 17, 2021 at 3:31 AM
Thank you Brian
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