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How I Feel About Picnics

ants in my food wood ticks eating on my back want to picnic honey? sure why not The birds haven't put their white goo in my hair yet

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Date: 7/16/2021 8:00:00 PM
Ha! Will you be picnicking again soon, Caren. Loved the clever poem still smiling.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/17/2021 3:31:00 AM
I will not
Date: 7/16/2021 11:08:00 AM
A wonderful poem that is both pretty and witty. Caren, best wishes for the future.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/17/2021 3:31:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad
Date: 7/16/2021 8:48:00 AM
Especially clever, Caren. You certainly made your point...pointedly.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/17/2021 3:31:00 AM
I was only given so many words
Date: 7/16/2021 8:28:00 AM
Funny, clever - a delightful read. Best wishes, Caren. Cheers, Brian
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/17/2021 3:31:00 AM
Thank you Brian

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