Shadow Hamilton Poet Couplet

How Hot Was It

Slowly over the hours it simmered.
intensifying as the heat deepened.

Senses now on fire in anticipation.
Skin heating up in expectation.

Blood now hot and bubbling.
Flames everywhere shooting.

Stomach growls as it is hit.
Legs give out and so I sit.

Wow that was one hot curry
Never ever good to hurry.

If you thought it something different
Would a woman really be so flagrant?

written 24/07/2015

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Bl Devnath July 27, 2015 at 12:29 PM Lol, it's a humorous one. Needs love to be out of flagrant perhaps. Beautifully done, my lovely friend. 7 i fee. Good luck if for contest. Loved always,bl

Kp Nunez July 27, 2015 at 12:11 AM One hot curry indeed...hahaah. Well Shadow, I kind of was really anticipating for the twist. After reading your writes, I know you're one who wouldn't really follow through on the other implied hot version. Thanks for the laughs! hugs! Shadow Hamilton July 27, 2015 at 5:17 AM I do sometimes write scorchers Kim like my piece of erotica ty hugs

Andrea Dietrich July 26, 2015 at 9:38 PM STill loving this yummy one!!! SUre hope it scores high! Shadow Hamilton July 27, 2015 at 5:16 AM ty Andrea hugs

Emile Pinet July 25, 2015 at 7:59 PM The words are descriptive and the humor is real...creating a feeling of mild frustration brought on by a case of fiery indigestion. Emile. Shadow Hamilton July 25, 2015 at 9:06 PM ty lol Emile hugs

Richard Lamoureux July 25, 2015 at 7:20 PM I won't be able to fet this image out of my mind Shadow. Better my mind than my nose *lol*! good luck in the contest. Shadow Hamilton July 25, 2015 at 9:04 PM ty Rick hugs

Andrea Dietrich July 25, 2015 at 12:03 AM hahaha. OH I LOVE THIS. This is thinking outside the box, sweetie!!! Shadow Hamilton July 25, 2015 at 3:04 AM hi Andrea so pleased that you like it hugs

M. L. Kiser July 24, 2015 at 11:58 PM You've described it beautifully. Shadow Hamilton July 25, 2015 at 3:00 AM ty M.L hugs

Lindsay Laurie July 24, 2015 at 8:17 PM G'day Shadow... nice play on words Shadow... and yes, some curries tend to hide those chillies that turn me inside out - Catch you later Shadow - Lindsay Shadow Hamilton July 25, 2015 at 3:00 AM nice to see you Lindsay ty and hugs

Afolabi Muideen July 24, 2015 at 5:29 PM A wonderful write, so beautiful I enjoyed the read. excellence.............A.M. Shadow Hamilton July 24, 2015 at 6:19 PM ty A.M hugs

Constance La France July 24, 2015 at 4:22 PM Shadow, this was so fun to read, 7, it happened to me one time with curry, oh that was hot, I felt like fire was coming out my ears and I want to thank you so much for my great placement in your Best Poem Contest, I am very honored Shadow Hamilton July 24, 2015 at 4:49 PM ty Connie I do love a really hot curry like madras

Tammy Reams July 24, 2015 at 3:12 PM I like this Shadow. It does keep you reading to the end! Shadow Hamilton July 24, 2015 at 4:47 PM ty Tammy hugs

Ovidiu Bocsa July 24, 2015 at 2:05 PM Beautifully written.It is love, it sun or great desire ?Sun opens the umbrella: Here is too hot, that even sun needs sunglasses. Shadow Hamilton July 24, 2015 at 2:18 PM ty Ovidiu hugs

Jan Allison July 24, 2015 at 2:03 PM loved the surprise ending Shadow - think many of us have gone with a twist for this contest:-) hugs Jan xx Shadow Hamilton July 24, 2015 at 2:17 PM ty Jan I like twists hugs