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How Hot Was It

Slowly over the hours it simmered. intensifying as the heat deepened. Senses now on fire in anticipation. Skin heating up in expectation. Blood now hot and bubbling. Flames everywhere shooting. Stomach growls as it is hit. Legs give out and so I sit. Wow that was one hot curry Never ever good to hurry. If you thought it something different Would a woman really be so flagrant? written 24/07/2015

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Bl Devnath

Date: 7/27/2015 12:29:00 PM

Lol, it's a humorous one. Needs love to be out of flagrant perhaps. Beautifully done, my lovely friend. 7 i fee. Good luck if for contest. Loved always,bl

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/27/2015 12:11:00 AM

One hot curry indeed...hahaah. Well Shadow, I kind of was really anticipating for the twist. After reading your writes, I know you're one who wouldn't really follow through on the other implied hot version. Thanks for the laughs! hugs!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2015 5:17:00 AM

I do sometimes write scorchers Kim like my piece of erotica ty hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/26/2015 9:38:00 PM

STill loving this yummy one!!! SUre hope it scores high!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/27/2015 5:16:00 AM

ty Andrea hugs

Emile Pinet

Date: 7/25/2015 7:59:00 PM

The words are descriptive and the humor is real...creating a feeling of mild frustration brought on by a case of fiery indigestion. Emile.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/25/2015 9:06:00 PM

ty lol Emile hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/25/2015 7:20:00 PM

I won't be able to fet this image out of my mind Shadow. Better my mind than my nose *lol*! good luck in the contest.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/25/2015 9:04:00 PM

ty Rick hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2015 12:03:00 AM

hahaha. OH I LOVE THIS. This is thinking outside the box, sweetie!!!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/25/2015 3:04:00 AM

hi Andrea so pleased that you like it hugs

M. L. Kiser

Date: 7/24/2015 11:58:00 PM

You've described it beautifully.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/25/2015 3:00:00 AM

ty M.L hugs

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/24/2015 8:17:00 PM

G'day Shadow... nice play on words Shadow... and yes, some curries tend to hide those chillies that turn me inside out - Catch you later Shadow - Lindsay

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/25/2015 3:00:00 AM

nice to see you Lindsay ty and hugs

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 7/24/2015 5:29:00 PM

A wonderful write, so beautiful I enjoyed the read. excellence.............A.M.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/24/2015 6:19:00 PM

ty A.M hugs

Constance La France

Date: 7/24/2015 4:22:00 PM

Shadow, this was so fun to read, 7, it happened to me one time with curry, oh that was hot, I felt like fire was coming out my ears and I want to thank you so much for my great placement in your Best Poem Contest, I am very honored

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/24/2015 4:49:00 PM

ty Connie I do love a really hot curry like madras