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How Hot Was It

Slowly over the hours it simmered.
intensifying as the heat deepened.

Senses now on fire in anticipation.
Skin heating up in expectation.

Blood now hot and bubbling.
Flames everywhere shooting.

Stomach growls as it is hit.
Legs give out and so I sit.

Wow that was one hot curry
Never ever good to hurry.

If you thought it something different
Would a woman really be so flagrant?

written 24/07/2015

Copyright © Shadow Hamilton | Year Posted 2015

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Bl Devnath Date: 7/27/2015 12:29:00 PM Lol, it's a humorous one. Needs love to be out of flagrant perhaps. Beautifully done, my lovely friend. 7 i fee. Good luck if for contest. Loved always,bl Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 7/27/2015 12:11:00 AM One hot curry indeed...hahaah. Well Shadow, I kind of was really anticipating for the twist. After reading your writes, I know you're one who wouldn't really follow through on the other implied hot version. Thanks for the laughs! hugs! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/27/2015 5:17:00 AM I do sometimes write scorchers Kim like my piece of erotica ty hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/26/2015 9:38:00 PM STill loving this yummy one!!! SUre hope it scores high! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/27/2015 5:16:00 AM ty Andrea hugs

Emile Pinet Date: 7/25/2015 7:59:00 PM The words are descriptive and the humor is real...creating a feeling of mild frustration brought on by a case of fiery indigestion. Emile. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/25/2015 9:06:00 PM ty lol Emile hugs

Richard Lamoureux Date: 7/25/2015 7:20:00 PM I won't be able to fet this image out of my mind Shadow. Better my mind than my nose *lol*! good luck in the contest. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/25/2015 9:04:00 PM ty Rick hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/25/2015 12:03:00 AM hahaha. OH I LOVE THIS. This is thinking outside the box, sweetie!!! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/25/2015 3:04:00 AM hi Andrea so pleased that you like it hugs

M. L. Kiser Date: 7/24/2015 11:58:00 PM You've described it beautifully. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/25/2015 3:00:00 AM ty M.L hugs

Lindsay Laurie Date: 7/24/2015 8:17:00 PM G'day Shadow... nice play on words Shadow... and yes, some curries tend to hide those chillies that turn me inside out - Catch you later Shadow - Lindsay Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/25/2015 3:00:00 AM nice to see you Lindsay ty and hugs

Afolabi Muideen Date: 7/24/2015 5:29:00 PM A wonderful write, so beautiful I enjoyed the read. excellence.............A.M. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/24/2015 6:19:00 PM ty A.M hugs

Constance La France Date: 7/24/2015 4:22:00 PM Shadow, this was so fun to read, 7, it happened to me one time with curry, oh that was hot, I felt like fire was coming out my ears and I want to thank you so much for my great placement in your Best Poem Contest, I am very honored Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/24/2015 4:49:00 PM ty Connie I do love a really hot curry like madras

Tammy Reams Date: 7/24/2015 3:12:00 PM I like this Shadow. It does keep you reading to the end! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/24/2015 4:47:00 PM ty Tammy hugs

Ovidiu Bocsa Date: 7/24/2015 2:05:00 PM Beautifully written.It is love, it sun or great desire ?Sun opens the umbrella: Here is too hot, that even sun needs sunglasses. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/24/2015 2:18:00 PM ty Ovidiu hugs

Jan Allison Date: 7/24/2015 2:03:00 PM loved the surprise ending Shadow - think many of us have gone with a twist for this contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/24/2015 2:17:00 PM ty Jan I like twists hugs