How Finished
Onward as if an immigrant who continued to quit with decision's to make second guessing but insistent never forfeiting or submitting,
tactic attacking the angle iron horse idol to victor a victim,
doors cast opened from darkened corners' leading those found to comfort zones entailing tension and turmoil refusing to live enlightened by priority and composure
but the keen mind's eye on the thief stealing consciously the vision and essence held ended thorough wickedness
now alone too proud and quick deviating a mans lost cause to one of worship none from blood
who live notorious under error and trial the ending becomes, he who loses his faith under gods only watchful son is without lesson foolishly caught down stream
the storm beginning, their losses form misusing time and their truth withheld, inside, washed away with ill state vs. denial.
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