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Onward as if an immigrant who continued to quit with decision's to make second guessing but insistent never forfeiting or submitting, tactic attacking the angle iron horse idol to victor a victim, doors cast opened from darkened corners' leading those found to comfort zones entailing tension and turmoil refusing to live enlightened by priority and composure but the keen mind's eye on the thief stealing consciously the vision and essence held ended thorough wickedness now alone too proud and quick deviating a mans lost cause to one of worship none from blood who live notorious under error and trial the ending becomes, he who loses his faith under gods only watchful son is without lesson foolishly caught down stream the storm beginning, their losses form misusing time and their truth withheld, inside, washed away with ill state vs. denial.

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Date: 6/7/2024 11:14:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/13/2016 11:03:00 PM
jason, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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