How Far Is It ?

The menacing clouds of war 
Often pounce to create havoc, 
The pigeons of peace 
Scared and scattered, fly away. 

The storm of hatred 
The storm of enmity 
The storm of death 
The storm of destruction, 
These devastating forces 
Design the ugly face of war. 
Men or women 
Children or youth 

Aged or the sick 
Rich or the poor; 
The ferocious WAR 
Without care and concern 
Without pity or parity 
Extends its biased hand 
Against the co-humans. 
Ignoring the path of truce 
The will and wish 
Of the super powers 
Ultimately would prevail. 
It is the co-human 
Who bears the brunt? 
It is an act inhuman 
That should be denounced. 
On whom ?
 Should the blame be put? 
On whom ?
 Should the outcome be focused? 
How far is it justified? 
To instill fear among citizens 
To enforce self-declared laws 
To massacre the innocents

To rain bombs on civilians 
To create mass destruction 
To treat civilians as criminals 
To aggressively destabilize nations?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 5:13 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 19, 2016 at 9:59 PM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
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January 1, 2016 at 11:00 AM
:)
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December 20, 2015 at 3:12 PM
ASHOK, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
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November 16, 2010 at 4:47 AM
Congratulations on going into the second round.Sara
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November 12, 2010 at 12:01 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Ashok. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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October 15, 2010 at 11:28 AM
Ashok, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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October 15, 2010 at 9:22 AM
GOOD MORNING! ASHOK, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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October 12, 2010 at 2:09 PM
Ashok, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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October 12, 2010 at 9:28 AM
War may be a necessary evil indefense of one's country but never as a means of achieving power or in search of oil. God Bless. Vince
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October 12, 2010 at 5:30 AM
Congrats Ashok on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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October 11, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Ashok what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
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October 10, 2010 at 12:05 PM
Mnay congrats on your wonderful feature this week. Rgds Janette
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April 12, 2010 at 11:32 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Ashok. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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April 9, 2010 at 9:28 PM
Welcome Askokji. I enjoyed your war and peace poem
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April 9, 2010 at 9:02 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. .uv.. "Sweetheart"
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