How Em I Doin'

Cupboard is empty and the sink is full.
Crumbs on the counter and dust on the sill.
Blanket and pillows on the couch.
Heart and souls hollow like an empty pouch.
Trouble came knocking, so I locked the door.
It's the only company I get, I've become such a bore.
Daily calenders over a week behind.
The clock keeps ticking and tightens the bind.

How em I doin? 
It's not hard to see.
From inside these walls.
Phones disconnected, so no one calls.
Some might think that's what I want.
But like others, I know how the past can haunt.
How ya doin?
They ask.
Just fine, I say, as I turn and run away.
To when times were simpler and only in my mind.

Blinds are drawn.
I barely know if it's dusk or dawn.
Climates at 68, don't know the season.
Goin outside, there seems no reason.
Modern invention tells me all that I could want to know.
But, doesn't fill my heart. 
And leaves my room with such a dim dull glow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 12/12/2011 11:30:00 PM
This is the life of a modern hermit in prose. Descript dark and .....when trouble comes knocking at your door so often, I can see where this character would shut out the rest of the world. Love the lines about dusk and dawn and not knowing the season with your climate set at 68...a different yet inticing type of poem. Thanks Robert. Happy Holidays, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/25/2011 10:12:00 PM
Packed full of emotions. Deeply saddening. Keep pouring them out...one day we will read the happy endings to all this.
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Date: 10/23/2011 6:14:00 PM
Very moving and heartfelt read. A lot of emotions pour off the lines as I read this. Thank you for sharing and May God Bless!
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Date: 10/23/2011 7:55:00 AM
Robert this is poem is sad . I hope it's only imagination and not personal experience. Some of your comments could be poems ,they are so poetic.What ever way this is a very good read .Anne
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Date: 10/22/2011 10:19:00 PM
Robert, I really think when trouble came knocking, you should have let him in. The rest of the poem would surely have had a different twist. Why don't you do it? I'd love to read the story.
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Date: 10/11/2011 9:21:00 PM
Is there a story behind this? The wind sounds dry and there is electricity in the air. Can get a guy down sometimes. What we need is a good storm to clean up the atmosphere.
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Date: 10/11/2011 1:15:00 AM
The feeling of depression emanates from this, but I really like it becuase it captures that emotion. Great way to paint a picture of gloom. That's good writing!
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