How Does the Soul Enter Heaven

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When my time on earth is done I will turn to shards of light 
like the sun that sparkles bright at the edge of night,  
I will leave this place and fly like an eagle out of sight; 

When the hourglass of life has poured out every grain 
I'll depart like fading grass despite the falling rain;  
for the existence of a life span is just a tiny stain;  

When my Father calls me home to that golden astrodome 
my immortal soul will praise Him as I say goodbye to Rome.  
I will join the angel's den and never be alone 

When my time on earth is done I will soar inside blue skies  
to the gully of God's  wonder where the eagles never die 
by the couloir of my heart, in the canyon of my soul's surmise.  

January 31, 2023 

Example for my contest :)

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Date: 2/5/2023 7:33:00 PM
I’m not sure anyone can beat your magnificent piece. Truly beautiful! :)
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Date: 2/2/2023 2:15:00 PM
Dear Mystic, your poem is so beautifully penned, so soothing, well done, blessings ~Constance
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Date: 2/2/2023 3:02:00 PM
Thank you dear Constance, its an illusive thought , I hope many try and answer this question for themselves, in their own creative way, God bless you
Date: 2/1/2023 2:31:00 PM
Sister Rose, this poem is downright MAGNIFICENT. you win…hahateehee 8-). Must say it was instantly inspiring. The theme is ifresisible. Hugs, sally
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Date: 2/2/2023 6:03:00 AM
Thank you for your kind visit my friend, keep well :)
Date: 2/1/2023 5:33:00 AM
Wonderful poetry, Vie, such faith will be rewarded..Stay well my friend. Harry
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Date: 2/1/2023 12:09:00 PM
Thank you Harry, for your visit here, the soul is the most important part of us aside from the heart. :)
Date: 2/1/2023 3:08:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Vie:)
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Date: 2/1/2023 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Jo for stopping by, glad you enjoyed it
Date: 2/1/2023 1:40:00 AM
Exhilarating poem of a soul that enters heavenly bliss. Wish you luck with your contest. Hugs xx
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Date: 2/1/2023 12:08:00 PM
Thank you Victor, I read this one in church today, something we don't often to stop and think about
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