How Does the Soul Enter Heaven

When my time on earth is done I will turn to shards of light 
like the sun that sparkles bright at the edge of night,  
I will leave this place and fly like an eagle out of sight; 

When the hourglass of life has poured out every grain 
I'll depart like fading grass despite the falling rain;  
for the existence of a life span is just a tiny stain;  

When my Father calls me home to that golden astrodome 
my immortal soul will praise Him as I say goodbye to Rome.  
I will join the angel's den and never be alone 

When my time on earth is done I will soar inside blue skies  
to the gully of God's  wonder where the eagles never die 
by the couloir of my heart, in the canyon of my soul's surmise.  

January 31, 2023 

Example for my contest :)
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Chuuk Avatar
February 5, 2023 at 7:33 PM
I’m not sure anyone can beat your magnificent piece. Truly beautiful! :)
La France Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 2:15 PM
Dear Mystic, your poem is so beautifully penned, so soothing, well done, blessings ~Constance
Rose  Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 3:02 PM
Thank you dear Constance, its an illusive thought , I hope many try and answer this question for themselves, in their own creative way, God bless you
Eslinger Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 2:31 PM
Sister Rose, this poem is downright MAGNIFICENT. you win…hahateehee 8-). Must say it was instantly inspiring. The theme is ifresisible. Hugs, sally
Rose  Avatar
February 2, 2023 at 6:03 AM
Thank you for your kind visit my friend, keep well :)
Horsman Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 5:33 AM
Wonderful poetry, Vie, such faith will be rewarded..Stay well my friend. Harry
Rose  Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Harry, for your visit here, the soul is the most important part of us aside from the heart. :)
Daniel Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 3:08 AM
A wonderful poem, Vie:)
Rose  Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 12:08 PM
Thank you Jo for stopping by, glad you enjoyed it
Buhagiar Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 1:40 AM
Exhilarating poem of a soul that enters heavenly bliss. Wish you luck with your contest. Hugs xx
Rose  Avatar
February 1, 2023 at 12:08 PM
Thank you Victor, I read this one in church today, something we don't often to stop and think about
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