HOW DOES LOVE DIE


If it is not watered with love passion, responsibility,
Humor, sensuality, fun, trust, respect and loyalty,
Petal by petal, and leaf by leaf it is bound to die,
Too late, too late to cry.

Treasure each other, as you would a vintage wine,
Chill out, enjoy a romantic restaurant and dine,
Hold hands and look into each other’s eyes,
In summer, choose a table under star studded skies.

Respect is an absolute dire necessity,
Learn together to face life with its every adversity,
And disagree maybe but talk everything through,
And count your blessings that are far more than few.

Never go to bed angry with each other,
This is your husband or wife, your lifetime lover,
For you will wake up in the same frame of mind,
And perhaps this is not being understanding or kind.

Be proud of your partner you vowed to love forever,
Let no one come between you, make life an adventure,
Say ‘I love you' at least three times in a day,
Have no secrets, life will be happy in every possible way.


POTD  14/10/24
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Kauffman Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 11:21 AM
Jennifer, congrats and high fives for your POTD! Your poem needs to be read by every engaged couple, newly married and those celebrating a lifetime of commitment. It is powerful joy and wise words! What a wonderful choice for a POTD! Sending you blessings and much joy! So happy for you and this honor!
Ashley Avatar
November 10, 2024 at 5:52 PM
Dearest Jennifer, my sweet poetry sister, I adore your poem, so beautifully and lovingly expressed. No truer, lovelier poetry has ever been written. Your shining heart glows in every genuine verse of this uplifting piece. Please accept my belated congratulations for POTD honors! Such a fine and worthy choice! Your golden soul reaches out in light to touch my soul and many more. I hope all is well with you and your wonderful family. Warmest wishes, my inspiring poetry sis.. ~Susan
Bell Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 1:23 AM
Life is too short to be angry. In saying that, why do I need to be dragged through underwear departments. Sure this is some sort of mad ritual women make men go through.
Read Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 10:50 AM
Hi Jennifer, I lost my soulmate in 2010 after 40 years of marriage, no one will ever take her place, my love for her still lives on. Enjoyed reading your wonderful poem.
Tor Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 3:21 AM
Jennifer all I can say after reading this wonderful advice on loving one another, that those that seek counseling in a troubled marriage should have this hanging throughout their home to read everyday and follow each of your words. They are what every marriage needs. I want to congratulate you for sharing this awesome Poetry of yours. I also want to congratulate you for receiving such an Honor of POTD which you deserve. God bless you and keep on sharing your thoughts, to encourage others. Hugs.
Bayles Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 7:25 AM
Nice rhyme, and I like the rhythm of this poem.
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2024 at 10:54 AM
Thanks for your sweet comments on my recent poems. Let me see if I can one of yours I haven't commented to yet
Callus Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Congratulations on a merited p.o.t.d. dear Jenny. Yes, love can wither and die if it is not looked after; taking it for granted would be a big mistake. Your advice definitely deserves to be heeded!! A fav for this poem which is heartfelt and sincere. ~ Warm regards & Hugs my friend. // paul
Kauffman Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 8:45 PM
Hi Jennifer! Congratulations on this marvelous POTD! Unshakable love constantly reinforced. What a beautiful Reminder not to take love for granted. It takes work! Well spoken. So happy for your honor! Hugs and blessings dear friend.
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 11:21 AM
By the way. Gotta fave this one
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 7:57 AM
Beautiful write, Jennifer!
Gentile Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 5:41 AM
Belated congratualtions Jennifer!! Your lines brought a tear to my eyes! So beautifully said and so very true! I just love this! Happy Saturday xxoo
Sands Avatar
October 19, 2024 at 5:20 AM
This is outstanding Jennifer. Excellent. Congratulations :)
Andresen Avatar
October 18, 2024 at 2:18 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Jenny :) - hugs
Canerdy Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 1:49 PM
CONGRATS on POTD, Jennifer~~well deserved! Janice
Lawrence Avatar
October 16, 2024 at 7:34 AM
Hello dear Jennifer, belated congratulations on your POTD ! Wise, sage and loving words come from your heart and that is no surprise. You have the gift of a very deep soul and so much intelligence to go along with it. big big hugs and congratulations love always, Susan :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 6:36 PM
Congrats on POTD, Jennifer! We must pass on these truths to the young married couples. Oh what joy life brings with lovely memories.
Buhagiar Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 10:29 PM
Back with my congratulations on your POTD.
George Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 9:54 PM
This is perhaps the best advice I have read in recent times to keep love alive. Every suggestion if followed religiously can prolong your love life. Without too much of frills and wordplay, you have said everything in simple language. No wonder this is made poem of the day. Congratulations sweet friend. This goes into my FAVE.
Nicole Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 8:52 PM
Dear Jennifer, your thoughts are beautiful and they hold so much truth. Love is like a flower in so many ways. It blossoms and then grows with tender loving care. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 8:39 PM
Congrats on POTD. Soupmail
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 6:05 PM
Hello Jennifer :-) Very lovely advice!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 4:46 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Dear Friend. Every word you said, is true.
Roper Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 2:12 PM
Congratulations on POTD my friend
Slaughter Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Sounds like a perfect recipe to me, Jennifer. A great selection for POTD, as well.
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