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How Do You Feel

The surging storm splitting apart the falling sky, blows with the harrowing fury in the wan mind wiry, the flaring wrath burns like blazing badland in a flash, scorching the desiccated soul to a stack of still ash. When thunderous storm of sorrow pours dismal rain, the shattered heart drowns in the dungeon of pain, the banks of mind break, eroded by dense despair, the river of affliction in full flood flows in nightmare. When opaque nights are moonless and dull days hazy, to steer the life adrift in the mist of maze is not easy. When garden flowers turn pale and pasture grass brown, the unshed tears fill up my mind where all hopes drown. In enthused draft the gloomy cloud drifts out of sight, as the shining stars glitter bright in the moonlit night, through the radiant air the satin surfs of stardust flow, my mind drinks the ambrosia of joy from its astral glow. I don’t drown dreams in the sea of despair, travel content on the segments of new road I pave in my time present, not feeling the mind lose the way, I let it delve inside, that’s where I discover the abode of ecstasy to reside. ______________ January 24, 2023 Contest : How Do You Feel Sponsored by : Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 1/26/2023 7:20:00 PM
Dear Subimal, your gifted pen wields intense imagery and metaphorical power. Wondrous emotions spill across the poetic page dressed in threads of lovely alliteration and rhymes. Congratulations for your excellent win in Rose's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/27/2023 10:34:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan for your kind visit, and for your encouraging comments on the poem that I value very much.
Date: 1/24/2023 11:06:00 AM
How do you feel I dared ask? You unloosed your soul and gave me just that. I felt the power of your answer, dear poet/poetess. Thank you for joining my contest, congrats and God bless !
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 1/27/2023 10:33:00 PM
Thank you for the placement and for the comments.

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