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Cry, Lady, Beauty, Woman, Sad, Unhappy

How Do You Feel I feel bubbly but corked Reserved and labeled In the light, I sparkle However, my home is dark And cold And chilled No, I'm not a message in a bottle Floating across the sea Never to be found Or a keepsake that's mothballed No, I sit in the cellar of life Collective and silent Like a vintage wine And worse, as someone's housewife My husband uncorks me At his whims And on his special occasions His eyes tell me he savors the taste As he sips away my abyss Yet as his eyes become fulfilled I am left empty and downtrodden Then he corks me back up And takes me back down 1/23/23 How Do You Feel Poetry Contest Sponsor-Mystic Rose Rose 2nd

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Date: 1/24/2023 11:20:00 PM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... God bless you.
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/25/2023 10:51:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 1/24/2023 7:17:00 PM
"my home is dark And cold And chilled" - a juxtaposition feeling. "message in a bottle", "keepsake", and "someone's housewife" - Great symbols and images of dense hidden feelings. Congratulations!
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/25/2023 10:51:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2023 12:04:00 PM
Dear Connie, the sad metaphorical beauty of your poem shines through the helpless tears, leaving me to deeply feel the poignant power of your gifted pen. Congratulations for your excellent win in Rose's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/25/2023 10:52:00 AM
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Date: 1/24/2023 11:03:00 AM
How do you feel I dared ask? You unloosed your soul and gave me just that. I felt the power of your answer, dear poet/poetess. Thank you for joining my contest, congrats and God bless !
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/25/2023 10:52:00 AM
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Date: 1/23/2023 4:49:00 PM
Oh, this is so nice. It bubbles with the vigor and spirit of the Champagne!
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Connie Pachecho
Date: 1/25/2023 10:52:00 AM
Thank You!

Book: Shattered Sighs