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I feel as if you're my missing puzzle, dear. Ethereal love, brawn, and joy to cheer You are my life and my innermost being. Counted each real nature and unseeing. I feel like your song, so be my verse. I'm yours, whether lenient or worse. Health or pain, you're eternal in my life. I shall love you despite social strife. I feel I'll still love you, no matter what.  That's why, honey, you have my trust. True love's name is lost to time. In silence, its source is sublime. Even quirks feel cute in your embrace. I'm happiest when I look at your face. Your touch evokes me of childhood.  Coffee you brew, folks we met in the hood.  I feel our love as an airy echo of passion. like a spirit striking the soul motion. A soul invasion causes an electric wave. Veins ooze gorgeous, sensual crave.
Written: January 21, 2023 How Do You Feel Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Mystic Rose Rose

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Date: 1/22/2023 7:20:00 AM
Romantic feelings come oozing out of these lines. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Keep it up. Thanks for dropping by. Sara
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Date: 1/22/2023 6:04:00 AM
A poem of love and longing. Endearing sentiments you convey--honoring lives spent together.
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Date: 1/22/2023 1:52:00 AM
"Health or pain, you're eternal in my life. I shall love you despite social strife." Love in its most sublime level. If such a love exists in a couple, life will be pure bliss. A beautifully composed love song. All the Best in the contest!
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Date: 1/21/2023 11:31:00 PM
Such a love song. Deserves a high ranking. Best for a win.
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Date: 1/21/2023 7:51:00 PM
Lasaad this is such a love inspiring piece. Your words convey a loyalty of the most high. Well written my friend...
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Date: 1/21/2023 7:40:00 PM
After my quiet day, i liked the switch to these passionate lines.A thorough description of l’affaire de coeur! Happy weekend!
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Date: 1/21/2023 5:12:00 PM
Breaths of amour accentuate your lines e’er so oft, Lasaad, possessing readers and inviting them into an enchanting realm my friend. Much enjoyed, Aloha William
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