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How Do We Know

Lost love, lost pain. No hate, no shame. Emotions are fadeing into the distance. Theres nothing I feel. theres nothing thats real. Why are we here whats the point. To live a life that we know not of. Is there this place we speak of above.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/5/2011 11:10:00 AM
i disagree wih you i think it has very good potential
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Date: 4/5/2011 9:08:00 AM
The last 2 lines are a little awkward. I would suggest reading them out loud. Also, I would like to know what makes your experience unique? Maybe if you gave an example, a description, or used an analogy, it would help make it more interesting and real for the reader. Think about your word choice, your verbs, adding question marks. I think you need to find what makes it authentically you.
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