How Do I Make You Feel

how do i make you feel
how i kiss you on your neck
how do i make you feel
out of my presence are you a wreck

how do i make you feel
when i nibble on your ear
how do i make you feel
when i enter into your atmosphere

how do i make you feel
when i run my fingers down your chest
how do i make you feel
when you lay your head on my breast

how do i make you feel
when i massage your feet
how do i make you feel
cuddled does your heart skip a beat

how do i make you feel 
i really really need to know
how do i make you feel
before my love continues to grow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Morgan Avatar
August 11, 2013 at 8:53 PM
how do you make me feel, a sense of worth of gold, how do you make me feel, happy,sad and many other fold. how do you make me feel, Wanted like a hunted criminal, how do you make me feel, needed every touch and hold of you! how do you make me feel, Selfish with constant craving, how do you make me feel, always in your arms darling! this is esp going for you, for my instant inspiration which will also appear in a Homage poet contest Deeply I humbly thank you. . .
Mitchell Avatar
August 12, 2013 at 3:34 PM
Your welcome!glad this inspired you!and thank you for the kind kind words and also i humbly accept!
Mc Mills-Cooper Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 8:04 PM
More romantic stuff here -I like it! MC
Mitchell Avatar
August 8, 2013 at 8:12 PM
glad you enjoyed it!
Kilmer Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 10:16 AM
Very sensuous. I may need a cold shower after this one. Great form and write. Love it. Kilmer
Mitchell Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 4:04 PM
well i am glad you enjoyed it!thank you very much
Bunch Avatar
March 12, 2013 at 9:27 PM
Wow, now I really love this poem. I must check out the form. I didn't formally thank you for your comment on my Gaijin or Haijin clerihew, so I'm doing that now. Thanks again and I am for sure adding this to my favorites. Great Job or as Gigno would say !!! haha, a little shot at Gigno.
Mitchell Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 5:48 PM
lol glad you really enjoyed this one thanks for the great review!
Jones Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 4:56 PM
Very lovely...just what we all want to know I think, we are appreciated for giving all we have and want to know if they feel the same way. Beautiful
Mitchell Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 11:33 AM
thanx!
Tsiluma Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 7:09 AM
Amazing write April! I like the confident-not so confident aspect, like you're sure but need confirmation - very nice. Well done.
Mitchell Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 11:33 AM
thanx!
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