How Do I Make You Feel

how do i make you feel
how i kiss you on your neck
how do i make you feel
out of my presence are you a wreck

how do i make you feel
when i nibble on your ear
how do i make you feel
when i enter into your atmosphere

how do i make you feel
when i run my fingers down your chest
how do i make you feel
when you lay your head on my breast

how do i make you feel
when i massage your feet
how do i make you feel
cuddled does your heart skip a beat

how do i make you feel 
i really really need to know
how do i make you feel
before my love continues to grow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 8/11/2013 8:53:00 PM
how do you make me feel, a sense of worth of gold, how do you make me feel, happy,sad and many other fold. how do you make me feel, Wanted like a hunted criminal, how do you make me feel, needed every touch and hold of you! how do you make me feel, Selfish with constant craving, how do you make me feel, always in your arms darling! this is esp going for you, for my instant inspiration which will also appear in a Homage poet contest Deeply I humbly thank you. . .
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April Mitchell
Date: 8/12/2013 3:34:00 PM
Your welcome!glad this inspired you!and thank you for the kind kind words and also i humbly accept!
Date: 8/8/2013 8:04:00 PM
More romantic stuff here -I like it! MC
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April Mitchell
Date: 8/8/2013 8:12:00 PM
glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 8/5/2013 10:16:00 AM
Very sensuous. I may need a cold shower after this one. Great form and write. Love it. Kilmer
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April Mitchell
Date: 8/5/2013 4:04:00 PM
well i am glad you enjoyed it!thank you very much
Date: 3/12/2013 9:27:00 PM
Wow, now I really love this poem. I must check out the form. I didn't formally thank you for your comment on my Gaijin or Haijin clerihew, so I'm doing that now. Thanks again and I am for sure adding this to my favorites. Great Job or as Gigno would say !!! haha, a little shot at Gigno.
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April Mitchell
Date: 4/24/2013 5:48:00 PM
lol glad you really enjoyed this one thanks for the great review!
Date: 2/6/2013 4:56:00 PM
Very lovely...just what we all want to know I think, we are appreciated for giving all we have and want to know if they feel the same way. Beautiful
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/7/2013 11:33:00 AM
thanx!
Date: 2/6/2013 7:09:00 AM
Amazing write April! I like the confident-not so confident aspect, like you're sure but need confirmation - very nice. Well done.
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April Mitchell
Date: 2/7/2013 11:33:00 AM
thanx!
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