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How Dim the Stars

"When love fades into the depth of night, stars lose the glimmer of their light." Poet's quote. A star riddled sky recurs in beautiful dreams We danced and whispered tender words of love Only Orion overheard Oh, starry, starry night how wistful I am when I gaze upon you now my heart yearning for him and for my loss Weeping in restless sleep; upon my bed I toss wishing on a distant star that somehow within my dreams I could take flight with wings of a songbird then I would croon lyrics of mourning, like a dove amid the gleam of starlight and moonbeams But dreams become tattered, ripped open at the seams No longer do I wish on stars above My heart refuses to be stirred by romance and moonlight for it remembers a love and the whispered vow Stars have dulled and dimmed; faded is their gloss January 2, 2021 ~ A Little Memory Constance La France's invented Form Contest

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Date: 1/21/2021 4:46:00 AM
Ahh!! Romantic winner. Congrats. Sara
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/21/2021 5:55:00 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 1/19/2021 12:10:00 PM
Jenna, congratulations on your win in my contest, A Little Memory using my invented Rhyme form, wonderful poem, I like it a lot and the quote and image too _Constance
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/21/2021 5:55:00 AM
Thanks for the honor of a placement.
Date: 1/4/2021 1:37:00 AM
This is so beautiful. I love it so... God bless you always sweet friend
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/4/2021 2:49:00 AM
Thanks ever so kindly, Regina.
Date: 1/3/2021 12:30:00 PM
What a gem. Terrific imagination and a sad story but such excellent poetry Jenna. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Happy New Year!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/4/2021 2:49:00 AM
It is a sad write, but it was the first memory that came to mind when I read the contest requirements. Thanks for leaving your thoughts for me, Jennifer.
Date: 1/2/2021 1:00:00 PM
Beautiful yet sad, Wonderful write Jenna..
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/3/2021 5:08:00 AM
Thanks for the kind remarks, Joseph. They're appreciated.
Date: 1/2/2021 8:16:00 AM
Beautifully Jenna, reflecting on lost love and it sure makes everything dull and grey. Love your quote too. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/2/2021 8:25:00 AM
Hi Tom. My weekend is just fine so far, and better now that I'm receiving such kind comments from PS friends. Thank you for leaving yours for me. You have a great weekend, too.
Date: 1/2/2021 6:56:00 AM
A sad but beautifully written poem, Jenna. If we let the past go love will always find us again. I really like the quote too. Good luck in the contest. Hugs.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/2/2021 8:24:00 AM
I'm thinking I'll ignore its knock on my door. Thank you for liking the lines and quote...also for the tip on centering the photo. I should familiarize myself with the posting abilities.
Date: 1/2/2021 6:29:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Jenna, how you’ve expressed the loss and yearning for a love is awesome. Love the quote and the beautiful picture too... Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 1/2/2021 8:22:00 AM
Hi Belle. Thank you for your generous remarks. I'm glad you found them and the picture to your liking.

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