How Could You

She sits there wondering
waiting
If you'll ever see
She's tired of waiting
crying
How could you let this be?


Locked in the system
a victim of reality
Lost to the unknown world
She sits there
Trapped in her fantasy


She stares out the window
Missing your heartbeat
Longing for your arms
But you won't ever see
You've left her to live here
die here
Drowning in a wordless sea


So many people
around her
but she can't ever tell
She's walking alone now
always
just a hollow shell


They tell her to listen
Move on
With her twisted life
She can't find a reason
a value
nothing but the blade of a knife

It's not the answer
she knows this
but the pain is just too much
You left her to bleed here
lie here
when she only craved your touch

Up in the air she raises
the blade oh so high
So many people
she's leaving
without a single goodbye

Plastic as a doll's toy
her smile was
But you couldn't see
That all she ever wanted
just you
but you had to leave

She sits there wondering
waiting
If you'll ever see
She grew tired of waiting
of crying
How could you let this be?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/30/2011 6:59:00 PM
I like this one too. pretty good in deed
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:51:00 PM
Nice poem...welcome to PS...Jimmy
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Date: 5/1/2011 11:28:00 AM
a sad write about loss, thanx for sharing. Tumelo
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:55:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed reading your creative poetry tonight.. hope u have fun and share your many delights with us all with luv..
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Date: 4/28/2011 6:44:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jessie. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2011 7:22:00 PM
Brilliant poem. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 4/27/2011 6:58:00 PM
Jessie, some issues are hard to handle... and crying and making a decision is all one can do... truly enjoyed...p.d.
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