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How Could Love Hurt Premiere Contest Winner

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Skies cast a periwinkle moodiness shimmers eyes full of tears gauze invade ankles feet scarcely touched grass Dousing blazes wearing scars as medallion & memories trophy-like tell me: love! do you hurt? terrible spirits? sensitive is love? or lovers are! All stars perfectly mellifluence equinox nymphs & fae party-free bright meadows mystical fireflies exclaiming love need touch assuredly lonely as thoughts & deeds! Dark & gloomy lay in dew waiting to undo constraints of firecracker And swagger caught throwing heart in her love fire. Written: November 09, 2022 1st Place Contest Winner A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 11/13/2022 11:45:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Date: 11/12/2022 7:42:00 AM
Back with congratulations in the contest.
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Date: 11/10/2022 8:40:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Great snapshot accompanying it. Sara
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Date: 11/10/2022 5:21:00 AM
You are an expert in this new form my friend. Splendidly done. Best to you.
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Date: 11/9/2022 11:11:00 PM
Fascinating poetry.
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Date: 11/9/2022 7:29:00 PM
Captivating! Enchanting!
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Date: 11/9/2022 6:26:00 PM
Love the sneak shape, lovely poem. Good luck in the contest.
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