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How can you deny this chemistry Felt deep within our hearts How can you reject true love That blew us off the charts How can you refuse desire Felt with a single touch How can you decline this craving Causing a deep burning rush How can you throw out the time Invested in this bond How can you forget the days Of memories so fond How can you strip to the bone All of what we were How could you not rebuild Is this what you really prefer?

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Date: 7/9/2010 6:22:00 PM
Hey there my Friend This is a remarkable poem. it has such deep feelings. I am so glad you felt safe enough to share this with those on here you don't know. I am so glad You an I are becoming friends. Well written. I would say this would be Free Style. Great Poem... see you Thursday Love Rhonda Hero Welcome to the Soup Site the people on this site are AWESOME!
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Date: 7/3/2010 11:59:00 AM
I like the essence of this couplet poem. The lines flow very well and the envelope rhyming pattern gives it a special spark. Your use of the rhetorical questioning technique certainly brings the theme to the forefront. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/3/2010 10:15:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Deedra. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2010 3:16:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation..
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