How Can You

How can you deny this chemistry
Felt deep within our hearts

How can you reject true love
That blew us off the charts

How can you refuse desire
Felt with a single touch

How can you decline this craving
Causing a deep burning rush

How can you throw out the time
Invested in this bond

How can you forget the days
Of memories so fond

How can you strip to the bone
All of what we were

How could you not rebuild 
Is this what you really prefer?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 9, 2010 at 6:22 PM
Hey there my Friend This is a remarkable poem. it has such deep feelings. I am so glad you felt safe enough to share this with those on here you don't know. I am so glad You an I are becoming friends. Well written. I would say this would be Free Style. Great Poem... see you Thursday Love Rhonda Hero Welcome to the Soup Site the people on this site are AWESOME!
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July 3, 2010 at 11:59 AM
I like the essence of this couplet poem. The lines flow very well and the envelope rhyming pattern gives it a special spark. Your use of the rhetorical questioning technique certainly brings the theme to the forefront. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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July 3, 2010 at 10:15 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Deedra. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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July 2, 2010 at 3:16 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii on vacation..
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