Joseph Sergi Poet Rhyme

How Can I Tell You

How can I tell you that I love you,
what can I do to let you know that it's true?
If I gave you the stars from the sky or the moon above,
would that show you true love?
How about a diamond bright one that shows pure light,
would that prove my love was right?
Or perhaps some gold and silver will do,
I would give it all to you.
But all I have to offer is my heart,
I feel it breaking when we're apart.
So my love tell me what to do,
how can I tell you that I love you?

JSergi

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Skat A February 22, 2015 at 5:52 PM Hi Joseph, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Win, Love ~SKAT~ Joseph Sergi February 23, 2015 at 3:33 PM Thank You for your kind words ,SKAT

Jan Allison February 22, 2015 at 4:27 PM beautifully expressed - congrats on your win:-) Hugs jan xx Joseph Sergi February 23, 2015 at 3:33 PM Jan thanks so much for your post

Nathan D. February 22, 2015 at 4:04 PM Sorry, it took me this long to close my contest. Congrats :) NATE Joseph Sergi February 23, 2015 at 3:34 PM No worries Nate!! Thanks

Charmaine Chircop June 9, 2014 at 5:18 PM There's nothing more beautiful than the gift of love wrapped within one's heart.No diamonds can compare to it.A very romantic and sentimental poem..Charma Joseph Sergi June 9, 2014 at 6:09 PM Thank you Charma for you beautiful words. The heart knows the true meaning of love and if we hear it then we blessed.

John Loving Iii March 4, 2014 at 11:15 AM A heart is just the start. Joseph Sergi March 4, 2014 at 3:29 PM So true John. Thanks for stopping by and the post.

Ralph Sergi February 24, 2014 at 6:15 PM Hi Joseph: A sincere plea to express your feelings. Good Write! Joseph Sergi February 25, 2014 at 3:20 PM Thanks for the post "Ralph" and for stopping by

Lucilla Carrillo February 22, 2014 at 11:00 AM This is very beautiful. The most precious thing you have is your heart. Be careful who you give it to. Remember that real love works both ways. If it don't it's not true love.... Lucilla Joseph Sergi February 22, 2014 at 11:25 AM So true Lucilla but have no fear for my heart is in very good hands! Thanks for the post and for stopping by!

Demetrios Trifiatis February 22, 2014 at 7:58 AM Love needs, in addition to words and gifts, actions of caring and concern! You see my friend Joseph, a gram of appropriate action rates more than a tone of words! Beautiful poem, sensitive , tender and romantic! Joseph Sergi February 22, 2014 at 8:52 AM Demetrios my friend you are so right. I thank you for you words of wisdom and for stopping by.

James Marshall Goff February 16, 2014 at 9:44 PM Joseph...heartfelt, melodious! Nice! Jimbo Joseph Sergi February 17, 2014 at 3:22 PM Jimbo thanks for the post and for stopping by.

Poet Destroyer A February 15, 2014 at 9:30 PM Joseph, touching words and emotions to express. You paint a very deep pain, it's not an easy thing to say, when all is running out.... Enjoyed.. Linda Joseph Sergi February 16, 2014 at 7:20 AM Linda thanks so much for stopping by and for your words of truth.

Vera Duggan February 15, 2014 at 6:57 PM Joseph that is one hell of a beautiful poem, absolutely loved it. Vera Joseph Sergi February 15, 2014 at 7:47 PM Vera thanks very much for the post and stopping by.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 15, 2014 at 12:54 PM - What is the joy with money or gold ..... and no one real love - Your heart is worth more than anything else - Beautiful Joseph!! - Have a nice weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Joseph Sergi February 15, 2014 at 3:20 PM With love in our life we are rich! Thank you Anne Lise for your kind words and for stopping by.

Richard Lamoureux February 15, 2014 at 12:42 PM I don't think you can do much more than this poem. Very well expressed love poem. Joseph Sergi February 15, 2014 at 3:21 PM High Praise comming from you Richard thank you so much for your post.