How Big Was It:

He went down to the lake behind the hills,
With a fishing pole and an attitude that kills,
He sat down on the edge and threw his line in,
Soon, something had nibbled and made him grin.

But as he wound it in he started to frown,
On the end of his line, no fish to be found,
So he cast out again for another attempt,
Forgetting to clean off his human scent.

But lo and behold the line went taut,
The fish so large he fought and fought,
And when it came in he had caught a mermaid,
He wondered to himself how much she'd weighed?

                      /|\

(for children)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 3:48 AM
A lovely poem, Rick. I caught this one late (excuse the pun.) But I'm glad I combed thru your list of poems and found this one. It a beaut. Made me smile at the end. Just don't tell the kids where she was hooked at, alright. Lol! Love the poem though. Much love to you.
Wolf Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 5:31 PM
I forgot about this one too! Haha, hook em where ya can RW. Thanks mate /|\
Farmer Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Agree, lots of children could enjoy your poem. Well penned Rick.
Wolf Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 11:52 PM
Thank you for dropping by Morgen /|\
Dalei Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Very funny.... Well penned. A brilliant presentation. Enjoyed...........//hugs
Allison Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 3:42 AM
The title made me lol Rick - a great fisherman's tale - to be enjoyed by adults and children alike:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 3:59 PM
Thank you Jan, glad I could make you smile /|\
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