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July.17. 2023
One line Poetry 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Joseph May
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High up shines the moon with an entourage of stars Its shimmering rays like silvery gleaming bars Come, sliding, slanting, and crashing down, Making the sky and the earth in loveliness adorn Moon, you are the unrivalled queen of the night. With your charm, the world you greatly delight. To catch a glimpse of your lovely, luminous face To the high heavens, we raise our eager eyes. In the quiescent quietude of a tranquil night In young hearts, love sparks you ignite. Your shining visage greatly thrills every heart. “As the misty moon rides high," our sorrows depart. The young and the old fall under your mesmerizing spell We feel your aura, though in the faraway sky you dwell. In the heavens, we can sight no other sphere on par, And in elation, we whisper – “How beautiful you are!”

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Date: 8/13/2023 8:55:00 AM
Your "How Beautiful You Are" is a wonderful write. Have a great day with your wonderful win............
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Date: 8/13/2023 7:32:00 AM
Lovely write Valsa, Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/13/2023 8:29:00 PM
Thanks a lot dear Joseph for placing my poem as one of the top.
Date: 7/17/2023 8:14:00 PM
Charming and mysterious simultaneously, Valsa. Very nice! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/17/2023 10:05:00 AM
Beautiful, graceful, mesmerizing poem , enjoying the majestic power of God's creation at hand, : )
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Date: 7/17/2023 3:54:00 AM
with an entourage of stars… In the quiescent quietude of a tranquil night…lovely imagery and alliteration! Be blessed, dear poet!
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Date: 7/17/2023 12:03:00 AM
Lovely Poem Valsa. Beautiful image created. Enjoyed.
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Date: 7/16/2023 11:47:00 PM
A lovely poem. Well written.
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Date: 7/16/2023 11:31:00 PM
lovely penning, l love the tranquility of the poem, and vision too, thanks for sharing
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