How Are You Doing

i dont understand 
and i dont get
why my life
is hard to fit
fit with other
fit inside
fit in school
fit other wise
its hard to be me
and no one gets me
might aswell leave
for i am just a rare disease
no one has heard of 
no one has seen
no one has never meet me
a guy with no page
no beginning 
no end
no one knows
until you get
get into my shoes
get into my brain
then you will see the shadows
were i see the remain
of all lost
the good the bad
the people who have a chance
but never fit in at least
they stay back and relax
watch the world go by 
no word or phrase said
until some one notices
and make a statement
"how are you doing,
why arent you out there"
cause i am not good enough
like many others said
so i live behind
the shadows and veins
no one sees or hears me
only gets advice from me
but they dont help 
or let me fit in
just help themselves
and let no one else in
that is society
live or betray
become one 
or become nothing
that is why so many leave
leave their lifes behind
down in the ground
cause the cant fit in
with out others making a sound
commenting and asking
making fun or betraying
this is society
but i would make my own thing
i would live in the shadow 
but make a master piece
of all the people
who dont see me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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