How are we being breathed

Reflect awhile, think How is breath being renewed Who enjoys the cappuccino we drink Fears that arise are in time subdued Our attitude undergoes a change Love and light are imbued Feeling magnetism strange It’s clear we are not body-mind Awareness expands cognitive range Eye becomes mindful and touch kind Thoughts mostly remain at rest Concepts are left behind In the cave of heart, God does nest His heartbeat resounds in our chest
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December 1, 2023 at 1:21 AM
Ah i need to try a terza rima been a while, this is a very clean and beautiful poem i especially love “ Awareness expands cognitive range” I agree. And fourth stanza hits strong, another one your brilliant writes with profound rhymes.
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